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Rayodragon — The Recruiting Speed Shock

Published: 2011-05-21 18:31:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1239; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 41
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Description The Two old stallions are walking under a thunderstorm in the middle of the Field.

Braveheart= This is crazy Scruffy!
Scruffy= Don't be a wuss.
BraveHeart= I hate lightning...
Scruffy= Is it your name Braveheart The Dragon Slayer.
Braveheart= Yeah I Prefer the dragon than this...

A lightning just felt next to the Old stallions.
bang!!

Braveheart= OH CELESTIA!!!! THAT WAS CLOSE!!!
lets get it out of here before we because Crispy ponies.

Another lightning just felt front of them.
BANG!!

A Pony just appear when the lightning hit the ground. The pony that appear is cover in electricity all over his body.

Static pony= Hey old ponies are you Crazy this is the danger zone! You are making my job not easy here.
Scruffy= Sorry, we are Looking for Speed Shock have you seen him?
Speed Shock= Oh That's me but you can call me Shock.
Braveheart= Nice to meet you Shock can(brave offer a hoofshake) we talk to-

Speed Shock= Wooah wooah! DON'T TOUCH ME! You have not Notice that i'm not grounded. My whole body is static electricity charge.
Braveheart= What is that Means?
Scruffy= If he touches a grounded pony it will be the same as lightning fallen on you.
Braveheart= Gulp... that's awesome.
Scruffy= Can we talk Shock.
Speed Shock= Can you see me I'm kinda busy here I trying to Deflection the lightning before it hits a Pony's house and you guy are not making it easy for me, you are in my way-
Oh sh@t a Positive charge! Got to go.
Braveheart= What his doing?
Scruffy= He is flying to the storm to catch a lightning before it his the positive charge area. When he gets to the Lightning he guides the lightning away from a pony's home or somepony. He is perfect.
Braveheart=Where he guides it then?
Scruffy= Here. That's why he said this is the danger zone.

Another lightning just felt next to Braveheart.
Braveheart= AAAAAAGH!

Braveheart jump on top of Scruffy's back.

Scruff= Get off!
Braveheart= sorry...

Few lightning later.


Speed Shock= So what you want to talk about? oh wait, hold on I need to remove the charge. You should go back away from me. (Braveheart and Scruffy took two step back away for Speed Shock) I was thinking more about a mile away from me.

A mile later.

Speed Shock=OKAY READY!
A far distance yell from Braveheart= ready....
Speed Shock= Here goes.

Speed Shock land on the ground his 4 hooves are now touching the ground then a huge explosion of electricity appear.

Scruffy= Impressive.
Braveheart= WOW! can we keep him?

Speed Shock= So what's up?
Scruffy= First let me say that is amazi- whoa whoa!!
(Scruffy's front right leg got stuck on Speed Shock's chest) what's going on here!!
Speed Shock= Oh sorry I forgot to tell you that I get magnetized when I do that. Wait what? your right leg is made of metal?
Braveheart= HA HA HA HA HA! we must keep him!
Scruffy= How long is this going to take?
Speed Shock= It will take Awhile.
Braveheart= ha ha ha! Now I don't fell bad for missing Cheerilee's date. This is way to fun.
Scruff= Shut it.

Few hours later.

Speed Shock= So you want me to Join the Destriers.
Braveheart= Yes you'll be perfect for the team.
Scruffy= We need your skill to rescue the Daughters of Harmony.
Speed Shock= I don't know it's Lightning Season and I'm the only pony that can't do this.
Braveheart= Before you said no look in this Picture of the 6 Ponies that where ponynap.
Speed Shock= Fluttershy!!!
Scruffy= You know her?
Speed Shock= Yeah I know her she is the reason I got my mark. When I was young, I was about to go back to my home in Ponyville until I heard help coming from the Evergreen forest. When I came to the cry of help, there was a young filly hiding from a horrible storm. I tried to give the filly cover and deflect all the lighting that would do more harm in the forest. When the storm stopped, I was completely exhausted, but I was able to save the young filly and bring her home to her family. That filly is Fluttershy we became good friends and she made this scarf for me.
Braveheart= So would you help us?
Speed Shock= Yes I'll be Destrier to rescue Fluttershy and her Friends.
Scruffy= 4 more to go.

OC pony Belongs to king-of-darkness5

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Comments: 11

K4nK4n [2011-05-22 12:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Cool character.

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ShifterDreams [2011-05-22 05:44:56 +0000 UTC]

wow i love how you bring in every pony ts really awsome

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Commisar-Erdno [2011-05-21 22:13:33 +0000 UTC]

i am more happy then a party full of pinkie pie's (hows that even possible)

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partiallyBatty In reply to Commisar-Erdno [2011-05-22 00:53:59 +0000 UTC]

In my books that ISN'T possible, but still it's a good analogy XD

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partiallyBatty [2011-05-21 21:29:09 +0000 UTC]

At last, we found someone to save Fluttershy. Once again, awesome way of introducing a pony

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MythicalGrim [2011-05-21 21:28:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, Idk what to say. THANKS MAN!!!...lol, my OC looks like a Wonderbolt with those goggles .

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Rayodragon In reply to MythicalGrim [2011-05-22 00:56:02 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad that you like it

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CynderSpyrolover [2011-05-21 20:02:04 +0000 UTC]

That's to good! Love the lightning!!!

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CirrusCloud9 [2011-05-21 19:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Excellent story for each one

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Niles-Prower [2011-05-21 18:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, that's s toru not so bad. Hm... probably can read it as always, but I understand what's going on here.

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nitron100 [2011-05-21 18:39:18 +0000 UTC]

whoa, thats quick...

*phew*, hes gonna save fluttershy, ok good C:

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