Comments: 13
Gogpaw [2013-07-01 11:27:36 +0000 UTC]
Take this with a grain of salt, but you should consider tweaking the distribution of the white space.
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Gogpaw In reply to Reagan700 [2013-07-01 15:08:25 +0000 UTC]
You requested a critique so I gave you one.
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Reagan700 In reply to Gogpaw [2013-07-01 20:20:16 +0000 UTC]
i see i just didnt understand what are you trying to say and also you didnt write it in the critic window.
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TankaaKumawani [2013-06-30 18:47:05 +0000 UTC]
Eh, plot it out and recycle it for your next series, perhaps?
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Reagan700 In reply to TankaaKumawani [2013-06-30 20:57:39 +0000 UTC]
my next story is kinda medieval so i dont think that robots will look good on it
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TankaaKumawani In reply to Reagan700 [2013-06-30 23:49:36 +0000 UTC]
Save it for some point after that, then.
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Reagan700 In reply to gato303co [2013-06-29 23:21:49 +0000 UTC]
y de todas tenia que ser la temporada que mas odio XD
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