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Published: 2012-06-15 12:27:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 666; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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onetealeaf [2012-06-15 13:04:57 +0000 UTC]

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Vision

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Technique

Impact


Hi~ I really like the colors you used in this e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
Vision: I don't know if you had a specific theme or anything in mind xD
Originality: Just a profile shot? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> I like how you went with semi-realism.
Technique: I really love how you colored the lips, and the delicate eyelashes and hair. The lips might be a little low though- lengthen the chin by a bit?
The shoulder is a bit too forward- move it back (which would be to the right) a little more. As well as at the base of the neck where it meets the chest, a slight bump to show the collarbone coming through.
Impact: The thing that really caught my eye was the colors and the delicate feeling of the picture e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Good job~ and keep it up!

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RedStar-Sama In reply to onetealeaf [2012-06-15 13:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Yayyy~ Thanks so much~ The truth is that when I just thought I'd sketch a delicate profile and had no idea what to do xDDD But I like more as I keep the original sketch, but the pastel colors and soft brown for the outline I liked.
The idea was that estubiera shoulder a bit cramped, but I'd like to change the lower neck line.
Thanks for the critique ~ You may want to give you a look at my gallery ~

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onetealeaf In reply to RedStar-Sama [2012-06-15 16:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome~ I will take a look :>

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