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Nitshe [2015-05-12 21:35:14 +0000 UTC]
*A wild cave has appeared! Enter it and get a free transformation!*
Very interesting story indeed. We still are left a bit hungry for more info on the world, but it's a good sign: we really feel there's something behind what's told right now.
Using separate characters as the cause of the changes and the one who helps him afterwards is a good idea, it immediately adds depth. The boy's reaction just after he's changed - to the thought of the judge - unsettled me for a short while; he seemed not to react enough. It is an excellent chapter nonetheless, the three characters are highly intriguing.
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Reel123 In reply to Bahogar [2014-05-09 18:11:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
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KettouRyuujin [2013-08-26 14:56:59 +0000 UTC]
Bum link... And I'm wondering if there's a pic of Kai post-TF xD
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Reel123 In reply to KettouRyuujin [2013-08-26 18:13:35 +0000 UTC]
Huh, couldn't get the link to work, weirdly. It's not particularly important anyway, was simply tring to streamline things. Thanks for pointing it out. As for a picture, none yet, I could try and do one or see if anyone fancied trying it though. Or both. Thanks for reading!
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Reel123 In reply to KettouRyuujin [2013-08-27 07:45:00 +0000 UTC]
The one to the Leviathan story, I just got rid of it because it didn't work. Got a picture of him now up the top anyway I did quickly.
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Reel123 In reply to SinzutheGreat [2013-08-24 22:01:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, reckon its worth continuing? I just couldn't find a good ending for the other one.
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