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gumworthzzz [2017-05-07 23:05:41 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to critique this drawing for a while.
First of all, the heads are perfect circles, which is very unnatural. I would suggest studying anatomy to get better looking heads. Also, there is no pressure on the lines, which bugs me a lot, and makes the piece less interesting to look at. The lines, however, are quite clean and I do applaud you for that. Also, SpongeBob and Squidward's skin colors are pitch white, which is unnatural, lazy, and collides on SpongeBob's sleeves. The shading is also much to be improved on. The shading is just done by lowering the luminosity scale on one solid color, which is pretty dull to look at. I think you should have used actual colors, but darker and with less opacity for the shading, for example, adding some violet or indigo to a cyan item to give off the illusion of shading, it would look more creative and add to the creepiness factor. The colors themselves aren't that bad, however if they were duller the atmosphere would work better, especially the blue on the walls. Plus, the blue on the walls clash with the blue in SpongeBob's eyes. I would suggest changing the hue on the walls. The table also looks way too geometric, I can tell you used the two set rectangle tools in Microsoft Paint, which won't help you improve with making actual lineart. I think that free-forming the table would make it less jarring. Sorry for the long critique, I look forward to you improving in the future. With best wishes, XxShaym1nxX ~ 

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TooRonz [2017-05-07 22:49:03 +0000 UTC]

OMG THIS LOOKS AMAZING!

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Bluecupcake01 [2017-05-07 22:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Is that SpongeBob?

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