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Description Love Me Not Her Part. 4

Laurynn
As me and Georgia walked through the gates to the school, everyone's eyes fell on us. There was not one person that didn't have their eyes on us. It was like...dull once we walked in. I mean, people could turn dull by just looking at me and Georgia. I mean, we both loved the same bands, the same clothes, the same colors, the same...well everything. Every girl wearing her sun dresses, short shorts, tank tops, whatever the fucking hoes wear nowadays. Every boy, wearing their slacks, jeans, oversized t-shirts, and shit like that. Stuff never fit into my category of...nice. I smiled and took my I-Pod out. I turned on Blood On The Dancefloor on full blast and me and Georgia walked into the school to get our timetables and shit like that.

"Hi, uhm...Laurynn and Georgia...Moore."
I said to the lady at the office. She smiled and nodded, getting a stack of papers out. She handed me and Georgia a pencil and we started writting down details about us. I didn't notice but Georgia hadn't written down anything. I looked up at her and saw her smiling. I glanced over, following her gaze, to find a boy. Someone that we'd listen to...a band or something. The front boy looked over at me and Georgia and winked at us. For some reason, my tummy flipped. I had to know his name. Georgia looked back at me, down to her paper, and started writting down random shit very fast. I did the same.

"We hope to see you soon, Georgia and Laurynn Moore."
The front desk lady smiled, and me and Georgia walked as fast as we could to catch up with the four guys.

"Look for a tall, black haired, dude." I said. Georgia smiled and nodded. We both searched the crowd and found, only prissy priss girls, and jocky dudes. No, emo, scene, rock, punk, shit hard-core guys. I sighed and Georgia started patting me on the shoulder very fast. I looked up at her to find her panicking. My eyes widened. SHe pointed to the water fountain and there he was. Beauty and all. He was like an angel that fell from above. I don't know why I was feeling like this. I mean, I never felt this way. I never really got a boyfriend because I knew that once we actually 'fell in love', me, Georgia, and mom would have to move to another state or city. It changed every single time.

"Hey," the black haired beauty said, looking up from the water fountain. "You guys are new right?" He asked.
We both smiled and nodded. He laughed and looked back at his group, who also were laughing.
"You should stick with us. We...kind of look like you. I'm Andy," He said pointing to himself. Andy, so that was his name. A beautiful name.
"Well, my real name is Andrew...but I don't like it. Alright, so this is Jinxx, Ashley Purdy, and Jake Pitts." Andy said pointing to all of the members in his clique. I smiled and waved at them. They waved back.

"Uhm, well I'm Laurynn and this is Georgia. We're sisters." I said, pointing at Georgia. She smiled also, and waved.

"You know...you kind of look like someone we would listen to. Like a band or something." Georgia said. I shook my head. Andy smiled and nodded.

"We are starting a band called Black Veil Brides...screamo." Andy said. Ashley and Jake nodded. Jinxx just staed blankly at the floor. And to just think, the bell will ring any minute and we won't care...we'll just stay together and ditch class. I thought.

"Well...you want to hear us or some-" "RING!" The bell rung and I looked at Andy, Ashley, Jinxx and Jake. Andy pointed to me and Georgia and wriggled his finger, indicating that he wanted to talk to us before the bell. Please ask if we want to ditch class...I know for sure I do.

"Hey, uhm, you guys don't have to, but me and Ashley were wondering...do you want to skip class and come with us to our apartment?" Andy asked. I cheered myself in my mind and smiled at him. Me and Georgia, both, nodded and we skipped outside. Andy garbbed something out of his skin tight jeans and a car horn beeped once. I smiled and looked Andy up and down. I looked over at Georgia and she smiled at me. I smiled back.

I pulled out my I-Pod once more and put on Jeffree Star on full blast. I pulled my phone out also, and texted Georgia.

alrite, lets figure dis out...i get andy...u get hooevr else...kk? I texted Georgia. When her phone went off, Andy took the phone out of her hand. My eyes widened and Georgia looked back at me, with wide eyes, and shrugged. I looked at Andy through the rear veiw mirror. Andy's eyes flikered and filled with...sexiness. I smiled.

"So, Laurynn...I see you already have a crush on me." Andy said. I hid my face with my hands and Andy sped on to his house.

To Be Countinued
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Comments: 10

MsBrandyDoll [2010-10-03 18:37:26 +0000 UTC]

Okay, first off Black Veil Brides is metal; not screamo. Second off, where's Sandra?
Anyway, you two are doing decently so far. So far there haven't been to many grammatical or spelling errors, and the story is easy to follow along with.

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rettemich1989 In reply to MsBrandyDoll [2010-10-04 00:12:58 +0000 UTC]

uhm...no sorry. andy sixx himself said that they are whatever. if you think they are screamo, then their screamo if you think their metal, then their metal.

...and thanx

i have a question...are you now checking our stories?

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MsBrandyDoll In reply to rettemich1989 [2010-10-04 00:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Even so, screamo bands are bands like The Devil Wears Prada, Bring Me The Horizon, and I Set My Friends on Fire. The only reason I said that was just to point out that it reads a little weird to have Andy say that they're screamo when in real life he's said many times before that they're rock/metal. Sorry if I sound like a douche

I've been meaning to read it for awhile now but haven't had the time until today and I wasn't trying to be mean with the comments. I'm just trying to help with making the story better. Part of writing is getting critiqued, after all.

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rettemich1989 In reply to MsBrandyDoll [2010-10-04 21:03:51 +0000 UTC]

lol its ok

lol it ok...i just...i didnt know what waws oging on so yah

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MsBrandyDoll In reply to rettemich1989 [2010-10-05 00:32:07 +0000 UTC]

it's okay!

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rettemich1989 In reply to MsBrandyDoll [2010-10-05 22:10:08 +0000 UTC]

lol

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GeorgiaMaiSx [2010-09-18 10:34:04 +0000 UTC]

ahahaha xD AHH IT'S SO GOOD you're chapters are putting mine to shame gurl okay, i'll get working on chapter 5 now

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rettemich1989 In reply to GeorgiaMaiSx [2010-09-18 14:34:41 +0000 UTC]

awh thanx
awh dont bag on your stories
lol ok
ill read it once its up

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GeorgiaMaiSx In reply to rettemich1989 [2010-09-19 08:00:20 +0000 UTC]

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rettemich1989 In reply to GeorgiaMaiSx [2010-09-19 19:10:24 +0000 UTC]

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