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Published: 2011-02-07 01:31:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 641; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 4
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Description i am in a state of
navies and blues. and i thought i would love you
as i love the ocean. i have painted pictures and written poems and
sang songs and thought thoughts of falling for someone in the way that
i love the sea for so long but here you are and you are no sea.

t'est pas la mer a moi. t'est tellement plus.

you are not the ocean. you are more the melting snow and
hope that springtime brings. you are the never ending sigh     and
the greatest silence is you. and it is kind of like contour drawings. look at this orchid. draw the shadows but only use one line. and if you look in the right way the most beautiful weight is held in the shadow that this strangest flower makes. that is you. you are the weight of the orchid, the shadow of the subject. because of this everything has new weight and new meaning and my mind and heart are slowly changing to fit with you. i have never known a kiss so significant, a stranger's stare to be so insignificant or a holding of the hands to be so magical.

and maybe all of this means is that i have found someone to read poems to. someone worth fighting for and you are worth it all. and maybe that is all it mean. but maybe it means so much more.
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CyneNoir [2011-02-27 00:41:09 +0000 UTC]

<3 Oh, this. So frank and open. The love comes across so clearly and I can feel the longing. Beautiful images- I especially adore the beginning.

and i thought i would love you
as i love the ocean. i have painted pictures and written poems and
sang songs and thought thoughts of falling for someone in the way that
i love the sea for so long but here you are and you are no sea.


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Reverberations In reply to CyneNoir [2011-03-04 07:25:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you this means so so much

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MissSarah15 [2011-02-09 05:49:56 +0000 UTC]

~sparklelikebowie said it first.
I can't. Even.

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Reverberations In reply to MissSarah15 [2011-02-11 05:52:42 +0000 UTC]

she's my girlfriend aren't i the luckiest

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MissSarah15 In reply to Reverberations [2011-02-11 06:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Ahh that's so awesome! (:

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sparklelikebowie [2011-02-07 03:55:49 +0000 UTC]

jesus fucking christ
i can't.
i have no words but i'll try.

i wish i was as eloquent and articulate as you and good with metaphor but fuck, you're everything.
good lord the only way i can explain this is writing another poem. give me a few.

but fuck. you're. just.. no words exist.
i adore you more than anything and everything

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Reverberations In reply to sparklelikebowie [2011-02-17 02:07:09 +0000 UTC]

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