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Published: 2004-04-19 18:01:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 240; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 11
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Description Day in day out. Picked up a hitchiker, told her I wasnt gonna hurt her if she cooperated. Chloraformed her in the parking lot of a deserted rest area when she thought it was gonna be done with soon. Tied her up with a roll of duct tape pitched her in the trunk and drove back home.

Ma was screaming like a banshee before I even got the trunk open, said that its been in a right terrible state all night long while I was "taking my time".

"WHY DONT YOU DO IT THEN MA!" immediately I apologized. I had taken time to pleasure myself, but she seemed to expect that. No, it was still wrong to keep it waiting like that.

Missy had started to come to as I was dragging her inside. Didnt matter though. When you wake up from chloraform not only do you have the worst headach ever, but you also grog in and out a few times before you make it all the way awake. She'd be with it by then and it wouldnt matter none.

The only sound was the unclacking of the locks as I opened up the basement drop in the livingroom floor. Thunk, flipped the trapdoor open, didnt look down there- didnt want to see it yet- grabbed little missy by an arm and gave her a few tugs. Fell like a stone. I thought maybe I had been stupid, the angle looked like she coulda landed on her head. That'd be bad- it dont like it when we give it the dead. I shime m'trusty mag-light down into the abyss....and there it is, that thing that came out of Ma after my daddy came back to this world for the solstice rites and raped her. It looks up at me with Daddy's eyes through one of the piss-poor masks it likes to make. It lifted its head and tried to thank me, but it couldnt, it got distracted by how much it needed carnage. I slapped the door shut and locked it down just as she started in to the screaming. I could tell by the look my Brother down there gave me that it was gonna be a long long night.

Ma smiled, "Just like his Daddy" she'd say...
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Comments: 11

t3h42 [2005-12-13 22:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow amazing story behind this, it's very well done I love it

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revscrj In reply to t3h42 [2006-01-24 18:50:11 +0000 UTC]

T...h...a...n...k.......y...o...u.....

(sry- havent been on DA in awhile )

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LordOfSenses [2004-12-12 05:34:50 +0000 UTC]

i like it, and the rape thing, i was asking if the monster brother raped the little one, it was more of a joke then a mongoose, but nonetheless it would be kinda funny.

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radiostar [2004-04-23 01:58:42 +0000 UTC]

interesting story. i like the idea of telling it from the antagonist's pov. kind of brings a different light to part of the story, as if they don't think it's so sadistic, so wrong to do what they do. also, nice graphic, i like the disfigured look everything. oh y eah, like your new icon.

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revscrj In reply to radiostar [2004-04-23 05:08:16 +0000 UTC]

>i like the idea of telling it from the antagonist's pov.

I really like this approach too, it allows for really twisted writing to come out (more to the point: it allows you to imagine what it would be like to be that being for a reason other than becomming that person )

>oh y eah, like your new icon.

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auntiehistamine [2004-04-22 02:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Pretty disturbing... Still, it reminds me of so many comparisons we make within our families.

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revscrj In reply to auntiehistamine [2004-04-23 06:06:08 +0000 UTC]



It should be disturbing!
Though I could write something of this nature to simulate a metaphor of my childhood, this isnt it- the roles are all wrong.

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revscrj In reply to revscrj [2004-04-23 22:53:45 +0000 UTC]


NO OF COURSE NOT haahahaha That was just a joke eheh....

Mental note: never mention family again.

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auntiehistamine In reply to revscrj [2004-04-23 22:34:59 +0000 UTC]

meant that it was a metaphor, unless you REALLY did have some family member locked in the basement????

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Bord-Airline [2004-04-20 09:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work Really love colours and scary atmosphere on this...
I regret to have a too bad english for understand all your description...

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revscrj In reply to Bord-Airline [2004-04-20 10:17:16 +0000 UTC]

I use bad grammer in it because the main character is supposed to be a little on the country side. Nutshell: guy gets hitchhiker, knocks her out, gets home where mother is angry for his lateness, he takes now reawakening person to a basement trapdoor in livingroom, drops her in, looks inside and sees THING, thing is his brother, as brother begins doing things that make victim scream horribly mother smiles says "just like his daddy".

Inspired by the feelings I get reading HP Lovecraft.

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