Comments: 11
LordOfSenses [2004-12-12 05:34:50 +0000 UTC]
i like it, and the rape thing, i was asking if the monster brother raped the little one, it was more of a joke then a mongoose, but nonetheless it would be kinda funny.
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radiostar [2004-04-23 01:58:42 +0000 UTC]
interesting story. i like the idea of telling it from the antagonist's pov. kind of brings a different light to part of the story, as if they don't think it's so sadistic, so wrong to do what they do. also, nice graphic, i like the disfigured look everything. oh y eah, like your new icon.
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auntiehistamine [2004-04-22 02:01:30 +0000 UTC]
Pretty disturbing... Still, it reminds me of so many comparisons we make within our families.
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revscrj In reply to Bord-Airline [2004-04-20 10:17:16 +0000 UTC]
I use bad grammer in it because the main character is supposed to be a little on the country side. Nutshell: guy gets hitchhiker, knocks her out, gets home where mother is angry for his lateness, he takes now reawakening person to a basement trapdoor in livingroom, drops her in, looks inside and sees THING, thing is his brother, as brother begins doing things that make victim scream horribly mother smiles says "just like his daddy".
Inspired by the feelings I get reading HP Lovecraft.
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