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It's kind of large, because I really wanted to show the steps I did. So Download or full view to see the whole thing.

If you can't read my handwriting, let me know, and I'll tell you what it says.. XD;; Sorry, I'm having trouble with the keyboard in PhotoShop. And I'm not exactly the best person for anatomy, but I've been practicing for a while, so I can give some basic pointers. Anything else you need to know, you can ask me, or if you'd rather have professional advice... Well, grab a book. XD;; Sorry I can't refer you to anyone else; I haven't found an online resource or a book that gives me enough information. At least, not for me.

Just be sure to use yourself and your clothes as references when you draw! 8D

But otherwise, the drawing was very good. Keep practicing and you'll get really good very quickly! :3




EDIT:

Umm, I'm just gonna go through and point out the stuff that I wrote up there XD

Basically, Your problem was with the direction of her spine. It was bending one way and then bending the opposite way in a different place. The thing is, you have to think of it in Physics terms. If one thing is pushing some part in one direction, then there must be something pushing back to balance it. In my replacement outline, I used her bending back to balance her. Another just as correct method would be to have her lean forward, bending her back forward. That would make her weight shift to the center, due to her head being solely pulled by gravity.

The clothes "misc" section was just something I had time to do. It sort of gives info on folds and stuff.

EDIT2:
Okay, =hollinesskiss just pointed out to my embarrassment that her hand was resting on her knee, and you can obviously see that I didn't do that XD;; I traced over and then when I changed the position of the legs, completely neglected to remember it. But I'm pretty sure that everything I said still stands, seeing as nothing I corrected was about the position of the arm... So, if you want to do that arm position, then feel free. There's nothing wrong with it; I just didn't remember to change it. Sorry


I am not an expert in anatomy nor am I any good at drawing backgrounds. All things that I correct are just general things that will make the anatomy at LEAST look a little better. I am not a miracle worker, and not everything I know about the body is correct. So please don't kill me.
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d4rKm4sK [2011-04-20 04:48:12 +0000 UTC]

wow amazing

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Rhyshian In reply to d4rKm4sK [2011-04-22 15:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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syramajic101 [2011-03-01 05:20:14 +0000 UTC]

Geebus you're getting good with that tablet. O_o /thumbs up/!!

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Rhyshian In reply to syramajic101 [2011-03-11 15:30:28 +0000 UTC]


I've had a lot of practice, but for some reason it's really hard to create the drawings directly onto the computer instead of scanning and then linearting with the tablet. I:

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Prisongirl [2010-11-17 04:59:16 +0000 UTC]

I'd kill to have you correct my drawings. OTL;;; XAX;; this is amazing.

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Rhyshian In reply to Prisongirl [2010-11-18 04:16:08 +0000 UTC]

XDDD Well, thank you!

BUT DON'T GO THAT FAR ;O;
Ugh, you don't need my help, you're already amazing

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Caleighrg [2010-11-07 14:37:36 +0000 UTC]

*takes notes* lol

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Rhyshian In reply to Caleighrg [2010-11-08 03:44:46 +0000 UTC]

XD That's good! Take notes because I'm giving a test on this information next class! Be prepared!

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Caleighrg In reply to Rhyshian [2010-11-08 22:39:19 +0000 UTC]

OH NOES!!!

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Creativegreenbeans [2010-11-06 19:43:43 +0000 UTC]

i like how u did this xD especially the comparing part xD

a few questions just for a mental note to make when i draw: what drawing tool do u use when u ink ur drawings on the computer? cause when i ink mine then never look right and i end up hating it on the spot. and another question: can u draw me a short simple tutorial on how to draw the head shape right? cause when ever i try to draw something shojo style, it never turns out looking "shojo"

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Rhyshian In reply to Creativegreenbeans [2010-11-08 03:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Well, thankies~ <3

Well, I use an Intuos3 Wacom tablet. The newer one is Intuos4, but any tablet will work, even the Bamboo. Just having a tablet helps, but you have to have a pen so that you can have the "pencil" feel. And then, I use Photoshop Elements 4.0, which we should probably update, but since we're limited to that old version, I use just the Brush tool, with a 5px width on a canvas that is around 3000x3000 px, depending on the size of the original drawing. I explode the original by 200% to make it look nicer when I finally shrink to the original size when I'm finished.

Well, sure, I can do that. Give me a week or so, I'll get one for you ASAP.

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Creativegreenbeans In reply to Rhyshian [2010-11-08 12:21:55 +0000 UTC]

xD

i hav a tablet, but the pen is probably my problem, seeing its fat and doesnt really have that "pencil" feel >0< and im using Paint Tool SAI, which i love xD

yay thankies! ~<3 xD

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KDhynamo [2010-11-05 16:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Instant for those tips on how a pleated should fold and bunch up. A llama for everything else! When I submit my drawings, I hope you're the one correcting them!

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Rhyshian In reply to KDhynamo [2010-11-05 21:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, thanks! XD I really think that everything I include in my red-lines are relevant, and I want to add extra information, like the pleated skirts, to the deviation so that people get more explanation.
Aww, thank you If I see your stuff in the gallery, I'll see if I can get around to red-lining it, then!

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KDhynamo In reply to Rhyshian [2010-11-06 02:50:26 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait!

And thanks for my 100th llama!

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Rhyshian In reply to KDhynamo [2010-11-08 03:56:01 +0000 UTC]

XD Well, you're welcome! Always glad to give out llamas.

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bookwormchick [2010-11-05 03:18:37 +0000 UTC]

u r awesome!!!! i is jealous... -_-.

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Rhyshian In reply to bookwormchick [2010-11-05 13:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks

Don't be jealous! O:

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Petraea [2010-11-04 23:53:21 +0000 UTC]

holy crap you are amazing

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Rhyshian In reply to Petraea [2010-11-05 13:15:28 +0000 UTC]

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IridescentStardust [2010-11-04 23:50:46 +0000 UTC]

*stares forever* though i think in the orig image her hand was supposed to be resting on her knee... but yeah XD dude this is amazing. I wanna like.. show it to everyone *checks out this club*

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Rhyshian In reply to IridescentStardust [2010-11-05 13:15:14 +0000 UTC]

Derp you're right.
I don't think anything I marked up depends on the arm, so I think it's okay XD;;

Well, thanks

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IridescentStardust [2010-11-04 23:47:50 +0000 UTC]

holy shit this is amazing

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SRLAC [2010-11-04 21:26:47 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, that was nice of you. <3
It looks real good, even though you only made a view subtle changes. WELL DONE! 8D

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Rhyshian In reply to SRLAC [2010-11-04 22:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Well, I AM a Corrector in #Improvement-Club ;D

XD Thank you~! Helping other people gives me more practice myself

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Sl33pdeprived [2010-11-04 21:04:13 +0000 UTC]

ryshian im srry i dint draw u something on ur birthday!!!!

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Rhyshian In reply to Sl33pdeprived [2010-11-04 22:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Dude, this is wrong place to say that XD

It's okay, I really don't care whether you give me something or not.

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Sl33pdeprived In reply to Rhyshian [2010-11-05 01:50:36 +0000 UTC]

y is it wrong?

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Rhyshian In reply to Sl33pdeprived [2010-11-05 13:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Well, because you posted a comment on one of my deviations and didn't even mention the picture. It's throwing away netiquette. I:<
It's almost the same as a "first comment".

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Sl33pdeprived In reply to Rhyshian [2010-11-05 21:25:53 +0000 UTC]

sorry ill remember next time hey how was your birthday and school

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