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wrzosowata-Iro [2010-05-02 22:43:27 +0000 UTC]
This one is very nice too. I really like your "crossing off" poems.
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Violated [2010-05-02 19:18:41 +0000 UTC]
I love this. I love these.
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steve2727 [2010-04-21 20:50:57 +0000 UTC]
CooL!
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RichardLeach In reply to tractern [2010-04-20 21:28:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. This is a form I never knew about before coming to dA, I really like it. What's going on structurally is obvious but somehow it conveys a lot of feeling.
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RichardLeach In reply to tractern [2010-04-20 21:26:24 +0000 UTC]
I felt something when I pulled that out, too, I'm glad it comes across.
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fredfree [2010-04-18 16:53:32 +0000 UTC]
lovely unhiddens.
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RichardLeach In reply to fredfree [2010-04-18 20:33:04 +0000 UTC]
the kind it's nice to find.
thanks, and for the fave too.
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claudiamm37 [2010-04-18 15:08:46 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you re-write....there is something poetic about abstracting another poem from a poem...no pun intended..wait..yea, I'll take the pun credit...
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RichardLeach In reply to claudiamm37 [2010-04-18 19:53:21 +0000 UTC]
Pun credit fully given, Claudia! And thanks!
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RichardLeach In reply to EintoeRn [2010-04-16 19:15:37 +0000 UTC]
Very true, very true... one must tug the harness as hard as possible some days.
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KatDiestel [2010-04-16 11:11:16 +0000 UTC]
a minimalist marvel
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JabLab [2010-04-16 05:56:28 +0000 UTC]
Love it.
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RichardLeach In reply to JabLab [2010-04-16 12:43:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much, Jonas!
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LauraTringaliHolmes [2010-04-16 00:52:52 +0000 UTC]
So spare. Hidden, but hinted. Hope you had some of the tea!
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RichardLeach In reply to LauraTringaliHolmes [2010-04-16 12:43:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, weeds. Yes, I drank the tea and drew (sort of) on the page with the tea bag!
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silentxrainxdrops [2010-04-15 22:48:49 +0000 UTC]
i love when you do these poetry pieces.
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partiallyHere [2010-04-15 21:03:05 +0000 UTC]
that is the gift of some of the days
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RichardLeach In reply to partiallyHere [2010-04-15 21:08:55 +0000 UTC]
it absolutely is
we cannot always make it so, but it happens
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