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Katgotclaws [2005-08-11 06:27:02 +0000 UTC]

very freaking awesomer

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EchidnaJoe [2005-08-05 03:26:29 +0000 UTC]

i SUPER BIG!

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blu3-th3-3chidna [2005-08-04 18:00:27 +0000 UTC]

very nice indeed, the hair is fabulous

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goldhedgehog [2005-08-04 09:32:24 +0000 UTC]

time for some critique *cracks knuckles* o.o''

Now, i see that your trying more of this DBZ work... *still needs to draw some* and that its getting better and better with each drawing as i understand that u only get better with the more u do, which i believe in myself *stands proud* but before i get sidetracked with being all guru-like...

... the aura/flare.. whatever they call it is drawn normally well as not much skill is required for that... i mean my brother could do that but of course drawing it without making any flaws is even more rewarding so i'll give you credit for that

The folds of the clothes are also averagely drawn beacuse i know that its really hard to draw folds on clothes, i partically find it annoying and that it only works well with my life drawing i.e. using a reference but learning how to draw folds off by heart is much more rewarding and satisfying so i would like to see more of the folds, or even better, draw at least up to the torso or up to the belt, as the belt has a lot of folds and adds more detail to the whole drawing.

Knowing that me and you are phlegmatics, i still think that drawing the rest of the body would help with ur overall knowledge of anatomy and applying guidelines generally which again i think is what can give u satisfaction that u did all on ur own.

however, my one concern is his face, it doesnt really look like gohan at all o.o'' it seems to resemble more of Goku.. but considering that Gohan is Goku's first born son, i see that ur trying to add realistically that as Gohan matures, he takes on his father's physical attributes like most sons would as to why a lot of people say that i look just like my father...

steadily ur work is improving but never forget those things that even me have learnt, everything needs to compliment each other and show the relationship between each other..

that all for me and a fav of course... because i know that u put a lot of effort into ur work

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Cyryn [2005-08-04 08:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Body and face, perfect. Aura, perfect. Only objection, hair looks a bit too long and like Goku's. (You have an old-skool DBZ fanatic on your hands, so I'll give you as in-depth critique as you will allow. )

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