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Rinku-ATL-FAN — The Sins of Tomorrow

Published: 2008-04-08 03:49:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 294; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description When I was two my father drugged me and left me to die in the middle of the forest, far from my village. If it wasn't for him I wouldn't be alive at this moment.

It started after my mother was killed, I had just turn one and my brother, Kyon, was five. After my mothers death my brother cared for me and protected me from my father...at lest till he had to go to sand so he could become a ninja. Thats when my father striked he didn't care to much for having a daughter, he only wanted sons. My mother on the other hand wanted at lest one daughter and an argument with my father about this was what got her killed.

When he found me in those woods I was nothing but a small child lost, hungry, and cold. Once he told me he would have killed me if I wasn't just a one year old, who was left there to die, anyway; even himself a "monster" as he has been called, thought that I should have been given the chance to live. For three years he, and a couple others, took care of me till my brother found me, after looking for me for those three years. In that time I had learned how be a ninja.

When I was brought back to our village, by Kyon, my father once again tried again to kill me. My brother tried to protect me but, was knocked out by father. When Kyon awoke father was dead.

Kyons skills as a ninja were parysed in school, and by his team, all the way to the incident that left him unable to fight for the sand village. He became ill; a disease made my brother go from a skilled ninja, to sick young man. When he came back to our village I took care of him and tried to make his life comfortable. Two years later a missing ninja attacked our village. My brother stood up to the ninja trying to protect me and the villagers. In the end only 15 people out of 200 made it out alive. I lost my brother and my grandmother that day. I remember holding the the necklace my brother gave me, while the boat sailed away. I was 12.
Me and the other survivors were found by a bunch of travelers. I didn't stay with them but, the rest did. I was going to fallow in my brother's foot steps and become a ninja. I  had known for a long time that the village my brother wanted me to go to was not sand; so instead I went to the next village "The village hidden in the leaves"

After weeks of waiting and tons of background checks I was allowed in.

Those few first days were interesting enough because I was from a clan that could learn (copy) from any clan or ability. That and apparently my brother arranged my coming to Konoha before the incident that took his life. I was surprised by this. He never told me anything about it and yet here I was in the Inuzuka clan head's home. As I sat in the main room of the house I was greeted by a boy my age with brown messy hair and and small white and brown dog.


“Hi I'm Inuzuka Kiba, and this is Akamaru,” he pointed to his dog “ your name?”

I looked at him and put on a smile “hello my name is Shikai Saiyo.”
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Comments: 5

demon-of-the-east [2008-04-13 03:26:20 +0000 UTC]

hmmm I realized I never commented up untill now...oh well cool story oh and yea if you havent read part 6 of a Puppets legacy I threw Saiyo in.

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Rinku-ATL-FAN In reply to demon-of-the-east [2008-04-14 04:04:36 +0000 UTC]

i know ....b/c u actually threw her......

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Silas-rules-over-me [2008-04-08 03:57:16 +0000 UTC]

nice... but lots of spelling errors... want me to fixies?

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Silas-rules-over-me In reply to Silas-rules-over-me [2008-04-08 04:01:19 +0000 UTC]

you know what? i don't really want to... and wtf does parsed mean?!

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Rinku-ATL-FAN In reply to Silas-rules-over-me [2008-04-08 04:17:09 +0000 UTC]

it's praised opps well Ivy did look it over oh well no ones perfect

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