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Rinkulover4ever50592 — Ike X Pit Fairytale pt. 3
Published: 2008-05-19 01:52:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 3599; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 14
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Pt 3.Gah was Palutena hard to draw! And her eyes turned out too close ANYWAYS. Jesus Christ help my crappy art skills TT
Anyways, if you didn't check out my gallery pic of Mary ( shame on you TT ) then I'll give u a little BG story to clear things up.
I drew her a year ago, and back then, I pretty much modeled everything after Pit; his clothes, his abilities ( except for Mary's arrows can put ppl to sleep and she's slight faster ) and his weapon. Yes, that Bow of Hypnos looks SUSPICIOUSLY like Pit's. Please don't comment about that. I KNOW. I'm just a lazy ass ok? No problem with that right?
Disclaimer: I don't own SSBB blah blah blah. I do own Mary though.
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this is pure art i cant draw comics only if its on one huge sheet
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Trust me. I know how you feel. It's an accomplishment for me to fit someone's waist on a page.
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Ive started reading your comic, and those are the things I noticed
-Not enough screenplay variation..I mean, you mostly just draw the faces on big plan or random body's part.
-Its a bit fuzzy to read. I think theres too much text everywhere on the same page.
Dont worry, it is still emjoyable so far, but those things kept bugging me so I told you.
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XDDD HAHAHAA.
LOL It's ok. I know all of that stuff already. Backgrounds are definitely NOT my forte >.<;;; It's honestly hard enough to draw the characters' faces P: Don't you agree?
That and I draw like, HUGE. ( I draw like, 10 X Larger than I really should be drawing haha;;; ) No paper can stand my drawing which stinks.
Actually, I don't think it's even the amount of text. I'm just really bad at writing XDD. I think if I ever do something like this again, I'll need someone to help with the narrative so the story isn't too confusing. Pfft.
All in all, that's really why I stopped drawing / writing this. It was too hard and my efforts weren't even really paying off *blehs*
So yeah, you're not alone in your opinions XDD. They're quite accurate actually;;;
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O shit I hope I didn't killed your enthusiam...
But hey, its not like if you didn't know what to improve! There're artists who are totally unaware of it because they think their art is the best and shitblabalbla. You just gotta believe a bit more in yourself, and as long that you enjoy what you're doing, skills shall not come in the way!
Okay?
I dont want you to give up.
I know you had ideas and all you wanted is to share your Ike x Pit love.
Also I did like to help you with narrative. I have few experiences!
-- always wanted to contribute to an doujinshi artist's work. ._.--
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haha no no, it's ok! ^_^ And just fyi, I've discontinued this manga since last year XDD. LMAO. So no, you didn't kill any enthusiasm! And besides, I'm very grateful that you were honest with me and told me like it is. I mean, that's what constructive criticism is all about right? You're not going to get anywhere if all people ever say is "OMG YOUR WORK IS AWESOME!"
LOL True that. I'm just taking forever to improve XD. But I'm glad that I'm not in total denial XP.
Seriously, I'm not giving up. I'm just waiting till I improve a fair amount before trying to do another doujin you know? I don't want to make art that looked like the effort put into them was half-assed.
Anyway, really? I'm pretty sure that I won't be making a doujin anytime soon, but I do, I'll see if you can help me
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you dont have crappy art skills! your awsome! and palutena looks great.
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again! Why do you diss you art?! Your art is BEAUTIFUL! I can't even tell you messed up! (untill I read the artist comment, lol )
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