Comments: 299
wen-na-ithil [2011-08-13 11:37:17 +0000 UTC]
Wow, my emotions are on overdrive at the moment. Though you have quite a lot of twists and storylines I think it is extremely well-written and doesn't seem too much. Impressive feat (I have read a lot of short stories, my own as well, that have too many changes for the reader to follow comfortably). hugs
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RiparianVeins In reply to wen-na-ithil [2012-04-07 01:37:29 +0000 UTC]
aw, thank you, so much! (excuse the disgusting belatedness of this comment.)
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Power-Peanut [2011-06-09 14:18:17 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely amazing.
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HeartSweet7 [2011-02-09 01:36:46 +0000 UTC]
This is the greatest short story I have ever read.
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WizBunny3 [2010-12-26 22:19:04 +0000 UTC]
Love it :3
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RiparianVeins In reply to senses--fail [2010-08-16 15:34:44 +0000 UTC]
=O
you're too kind.
but thank you.
(and i love senses fail.)
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Poisonedkitty [2010-07-25 19:19:04 +0000 UTC]
Snap. This had a lot of emotions, for me.
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RiparianVeins In reply to Poisonedkitty [2010-10-22 02:05:25 +0000 UTC]
wow. i'm really late replying to this, but as a writer, i'm glad that my work evoked emotions in someone. i hope they weren't bad, aha. thank you, again.
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melovebooks210 [2010-07-14 02:42:07 +0000 UTC]
so beatuiful and thanks for such a good story
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RiparianVeins In reply to tigertailzlc [2012-04-07 01:45:41 +0000 UTC]
oh! thanks, it's fixed. it doesn't, does it? however, thank you for reading, and leaving a lovely (and constructive) comment (:.
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MoonWhisperxxx [2010-04-30 00:37:34 +0000 UTC]
I'm speechless. Utterly so. It was a bit confusing, but I was so engrossed by the beautiful language and manipulation of emotion that I focused little on anything else. Excellent, excellent!
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Sephrenia0110 [2010-03-22 22:46:04 +0000 UTC]
I don't usually read stories on dA, but this is amazing. It's something I can relate to on many levels.
Great job!
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Bigred52 [2010-03-08 00:56:25 +0000 UTC]
That was extremely moving you pulled at my heart strings the whole step of the way great story. I hope it wasn't based on any real experience
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RiparianVeins In reply to Bigred52 [2010-04-18 21:20:22 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much. that's one of the best compliments a writer can hope for. no, it wasn't, fortunately.
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ZomaS-M [2010-03-06 21:59:54 +0000 UTC]
I'm stunned, really. This is so breathtaking in every way: the emotions, the actions, the images painted in my head... There is little I can say that has not already been said. It is touching, and it is wonderfully constructed. There's a real beauty (and a real truth) in her pain and in the discovery that she's been healed, and in the way the events in her life keep her moving forward in spite of herself. I applaud this piece; it's been a long while since a short-story has made me cry in both anguish and joy.
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RiparianVeins In reply to ZomaS-M [2010-04-18 21:20:45 +0000 UTC]
thank you. i don't know what to say (except for thank youuuu!).
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K9battlecry [2010-03-06 07:36:11 +0000 UTC]
Magic ^^
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xXheartbroken [2010-03-05 08:32:50 +0000 UTC]
They say tears are writer's best award;
You deserve mine.
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RiparianVeins In reply to xXheartbroken [2010-03-06 02:57:34 +0000 UTC]
wow, thank you so much. i don't know what to say, haha.
(that's a beautiful phrase, by the way =].)
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glidergem [2010-03-05 07:53:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow. You leave me speechless. I can't begin to describe the feelings and connections. Thank you is all I can say.
May you continue to share
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SephirothCrystal [2010-03-05 07:41:05 +0000 UTC]
I must say, I don't read the prose on DA too often. The first line of the preview caught me, and somehow I was drawn to it when I haven't been drawn to anything else like that before.
This short story is a very realistic portrayal of the...short end of the stick when it comes to life. I read every last word and sometimes twice, I love it when writing can draw me in like this. While this wasn't moving to tears or anything, it touched me pretty deeply. Beautiful job on this. I do believe I'll be checking out more of your work.
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RiparianVeins In reply to SephirothCrystal [2010-04-18 21:22:12 +0000 UTC]
thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. really, thank you.
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InTheNextLife [2010-03-05 07:11:56 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautifully breathtaking. Your DD is well deserved.
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Maygen-Lucia [2010-03-05 06:45:03 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. Really amazingly bittersweet.
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