mingolando [2008-10-13 00:36:28 +0000 UTC]
Grrrr! For some reason this wasn't on my "recent deviations" page. >:[Wait a second? How come there are only 1-2 left??!?! This is like, the beginning of the story!!! I'm so confused.Good, as always It was a little sort (substance wise), but still good. I wish we could have seen what Wren had done in the night, but oh well. Can't wait for the next one though lawl, Nate is too much fun
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RisingAngelus In reply to mingolando [2008-10-13 04:48:02 +0000 UTC]
It's almost over because the purpose of the story was show how she became. The actual villain Night Wren's adventures was just in the game. It was just a very long profile history on the video game character I created. You'll see later. I know, stories tend to get choppy towards the end for me. Probably because I'm not as into it. I'm really trying to improve, but somehow it's inevitable. I might, however, add what she did in the night. I never actually thought about that, lol. I'll have to think of something. hehe. I have no idea what she could be doing, other that just flying around and exploring the city. But I'll try to think of ideas, I'll look for stuff and write it down. Wait...what do you mean he's too much fun? I'm confused. o_O
mingolando In reply to RisingAngelus [2008-10-13 22:56:50 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh! Actually I think I remember you saying that earlier, lol.Meaning Nate is so old and grumpy and wise and fun to read about, almost too much fun
RisingAngelus In reply to mingolando [2008-10-13 23:55:08 +0000 UTC]
lol. indeed. I do like him too.
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