FoXyZArt [2016-08-27 16:41:05 +0000 UTC]
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The drawing is good, but it has its mistakes:
1. The eyes shoud be a little closer to each other.
2. The eyes shoud be in the same vertical line.
3. The eyes shoud be bigger, but that is personal preference.
The shadows are ok, but there are some places where no light shoud touch:
1. Some parts of the crest (bottom hair) shoudnt have light, like the left part, shoud be blocked by the left wing.
2.The Secondaries of the right wing cant be touched by light because its blocked by the left shoulder, upper arm and also by the body.
3. Because of the light placement, the face shoud be more ¨lit up¨. There shoud be a little bit more light in the right eyes area.
And, to end this off, i will tell you something, you shoud put some shadow in the eyes, to give more depth per say. Because now, the eyes, look like a 2d image.
That is it. To learn pony body part names you shoud check out this: www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06…
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