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Published: 2007-08-24 23:23:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 21518; Favourites: 284; Downloads: 0
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Description This is sort of how these OC’s entered my brain. I hadn’t really thought up oc’s before, unless I needed some minor ones for fanfiction (like random village man #2). But these four just showed up with a whole lot of character and an interesting story (which still needs some hammering out).

Kyoko – Kyoko was born and raised in the Northern Water Temple. She was adopted by the Grand Sage Katara after her mother had passed away during Kyoko's birth. It didn't take long for Katara to realize that Kyoko was in fact the next avatar.

She was very curious and bright, even when she was young. She followed Katara around and learned all she could about water bending. Kyoko did have a habit of skipping lessons sometimes to rest in the Spirit Oasis. Katara was convinced that she had a closer connection to the spirit world because of it.

When Kyoko was 13 she told everyone that she knew she was the avatar. The council at first denied it, believing that she should be a bit older before she knew, but Katara told them "If she is mature enough to tell us that she is the avatar, she has already come to terms with it herself."

Thus Kyoko began learning the other elements. Her last element was fire, which she mastered with the help of the retired Fire Lord Zuko.

Now 16 she had finished her training of the elements and has begun learning about the avatar state from Katara

Naoki – Naoki (or Nao) is Katara’s granddaughter through her second son and his Earth Nation wife, their only child so far. She grew up in the Eastern Air Temple, where her father had decided to try and rebuild the Air Nomad culture from what Aang had written, and from what few remnants remained.

She has always revered Avatar Aang in an almost god like manner. Thus she decided to work hard to become just as good an Air Bender, and maintain as much of the old ways as she could.

At the age of 13 she had just about mastered Air Bending and even gone through the difficult procedure of getting the tattoos to prove it.

She is tough and not as care free as the Air Nomads of the past, something she blames on the Earth blood in her. She was very upset when Kyoko didn’t accept her to be her air bending teacher. Kyoko told her that although she was talented, she still had a lot to learn herself. Since then Nao has followed Kyoko around trying to prove herself to the new Avatar.


Yuudai – A poor scholar from the Earth Kingdom, he is quite intelligent and well versed in history and culture. He dreams of one day making enough money to attend the University of Ba Sing Se. He had made friends with Naoki when he was visiting the Eastern Air Temple, and therefore also ran into Kyoko. The three of them have been friend(ish) for a while now.


Kazuo – The seventeen year old randomly made friends with Kyoko while he was in port at the North Pole. Not much about him is known to the other three, save that his father is a wealthy lord from the Fire Nation. He owns a small boat, designed by himself and made from wood rather than metal (as most of the ships were by that time).

Whew! Okay there they are so far. There is a ton more to write about them though, I have a whole history and am not working through making a family chart for each as well. I have to say that it isn’t that easy!

The story I have in my head is quite long, but I wonder if I will ever get around to making something happen with it, or if it will remain my story alone forever… Ah well, time will tell!

Avatar © Mike, Bryan and affiliates
Kyoko, Naoki (Nao), Yuudai and Kazuo © Rebecca aka River-bird
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Comments: 91

Haineko14 [2012-11-03 23:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Awesome? Did you draw/write the story already?

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river-bird In reply to Haineko14 [2012-11-08 18:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Nah, I never did get around to writing it out. : /

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Haineko14 In reply to river-bird [2012-11-09 00:03:06 +0000 UTC]

I would of totally read it! Unless I write it ehehehe. Kidding but really ughhhh

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river-bird In reply to Haineko14 [2012-11-10 18:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I will see what I can do. There is more about this story in my scraps section as well.

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Haineko14 In reply to river-bird [2012-11-12 00:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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Natalie4ever [2012-04-15 08:30:15 +0000 UTC]

hehheh nicee, no one should blame you, this was posted in 2007 afterall

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river-bird In reply to Natalie4ever [2012-04-15 22:54:13 +0000 UTC]

8D What do you mean?

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Natalie4ever In reply to river-bird [2012-04-16 00:50:16 +0000 UTC]

ack, sorry I didn't mean to say that! that was for another deviation in my tabs, sorry about the confusion Great artwork and awesome story background!

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akainu0 [2011-05-18 03:56:57 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to see a fanfic made out of these guys!

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Kinoko4 [2011-04-02 14:25:44 +0000 UTC]

Cool characters! It seems it's been a while since you posted this, so I'll ask: Have you written/drawn out a story with them? I'd love to know more about them. I can imagine the characters getting into lots of trouble, like the canon Team Avatar. :3

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river-bird In reply to Kinoko4 [2011-04-02 17:13:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I did have a story idea for them. I set it aside though so that I wasn`t working two comics at once. I can barely find time to update Within the Circuit let alone a second comic.

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MissAspie [2010-09-30 12:10:47 +0000 UTC]

wow.

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river-bird In reply to MissAspie [2010-10-01 13:43:11 +0000 UTC]

...Thanks?

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MissAspie In reply to river-bird [2010-10-01 13:46:14 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

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Jreamsh [2010-09-01 15:03:04 +0000 UTC]

How is naoki an airbender?

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river-bird In reply to Jreamsh [2010-09-03 20:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Katara and Aang's granddaughter.

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Gamer-Grl [2010-07-23 19:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Woo! I can't wait to read the story on them.

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Omenseer [2010-07-06 08:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Why did you have her learn fire last?

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river-bird In reply to Omenseer [2010-07-07 05:32:12 +0000 UTC]

That is a good question. I don't have a good answer expect to say "What was I thinking?" lol

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Omenseer In reply to river-bird [2010-07-07 06:16:50 +0000 UTC]

At least you're honest. That's refreshing.

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Goku502 In reply to Omenseer [2010-08-03 07:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you could say that she put it off because fire is the opposite of water which is what she knew first.

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Omenseer In reply to Goku502 [2010-08-03 20:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Trying to learn these things outside the cycle doesn't end well however.

I guess it's moot what with the Legend of Korra in the works.

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Goku502 In reply to Omenseer [2010-08-05 01:57:59 +0000 UTC]

I have my own spin off that I'm trying to write out. I don't know if I'll like the Legend of Korra or not, but I'm still gonna try to get my up on deviantart and facebook.

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Omenseer In reply to Goku502 [2010-08-05 08:11:53 +0000 UTC]

The creators of A: TLA are on the job so hopefully it should be good.

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Goku502 In reply to Omenseer [2010-08-05 22:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, those guys are pretty good

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narutorpcmaker [2010-04-13 00:54:11 +0000 UTC]

im srry im just saying these is really good n all but they all look like characters from the show so there not really very oringal but idk y every one makes agng into a girl lol

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NattiKay [2009-04-15 00:59:32 +0000 UTC]

oh, I'm so jealous of your skills

You rule! X3

Ha, I love Yuudai's expression, and Kyoko...she's beautiful!

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taven-stone [2008-07-29 07:46:06 +0000 UTC]

nice art

but im not hot for the idea

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river-bird In reply to taven-stone [2008-07-29 14:53:40 +0000 UTC]

^__^ And thats okay. Thank you for the compliment! : D

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yuwing [2008-06-23 01:49:33 +0000 UTC]

good job
i like the concept, your hands, clouds and color
You pretty much nailed everything except for the weird armpit on the girl in blue xD

it's awesome

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KarniMolly [2008-05-08 10:55:17 +0000 UTC]

o///o I really like the design of your OCs, especially Kyoko's... She seems to be very mature. Poor girl She has the whole weight of Aang's deeds on her shoulders ó__ò

Erm... May I draw a fanart of her? ó.ò° Plz?

I love Watertribe-girls and Kyoko's hairdo has such a great design, I'd really like to try drawing it *__*

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river-bird In reply to KarniMolly [2008-05-08 13:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I like Kyoko too XD Everyone seems more partial to Yuudai, I was surprised by his popularity!

I adore your art! *__* If you want to draw them go ahead! Send me the link after cause I would love to see it!

I have a great story brewing in my head for them, but I really want to focus on WTC before I take on another project. I have also been playing around with animation, I may make a mini short with them, but that really depends on how busy I am with my art groups animation project and work this summer.

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KarniMolly In reply to river-bird [2008-05-08 15:31:25 +0000 UTC]

I was expecting more interest in Kazuo
But I am a insufferable Katara- and Hama-fangirl and... I just love blue eyes, blue clothes and smooth bworn hair *__* It's so much fun to draw!

Thank you And here you go: [link]

Oh, that's ok. Take your time, I can wait (though I'm pretty curious about their story, too XD)

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river-bird In reply to KarniMolly [2008-05-09 14:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Thats AWESOME!!!!!! <3

I thought Kazuo too... maybe I should draw another picture of the group....

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KarniMolly In reply to river-bird [2008-05-12 12:45:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, you should! *______*°°°

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KarniMolly In reply to KarniMolly [2008-05-08 15:33:10 +0000 UTC]

*"aN sufferable fangirl" and "BROWN hair" -.-°

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8300-chii [2008-04-04 10:34:54 +0000 UTC]

This will mean:Katara and Aang got a kid together right?

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river-bird In reply to 8300-chii [2008-04-06 15:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Yes ^__^

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bonnybanshey [2008-03-24 12:26:18 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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river-bird In reply to bonnybanshey [2008-03-24 15:42:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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bonnybanshey In reply to river-bird [2008-03-24 16:44:52 +0000 UTC]

welcome i edit scrrencaps to get my oc's

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AdamAnt543 [2008-02-20 01:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Great characters.

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Aryck1095 [2008-02-04 03:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Is Naoki Katara and Aangs grandaughter?

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river-bird In reply to Aryck1095 [2008-02-04 04:42:17 +0000 UTC]

great grandaughter (1st one)

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Alexwind [2007-12-21 09:57:10 +0000 UTC]

wow very nice

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Hiroko819 [2007-12-06 07:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I usually don't like OC centric stories, but these characters sound really interesting. And Yuudai is simply adorable, I just wanna hug him. ^_^ Very nice art style. I like Kyoko's expression.

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Goddess-Of-Sugar [2007-11-23 03:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Haha! They are so cute! I love them! You should do an OC comic

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atmos00000 [2007-11-20 01:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting back story you have with this cast of OCs. I'd definitely be interested in hearing their story. As for the picture, nice perspective with the freefall and their expressions.

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percguy89 [2007-10-28 02:54:13 +0000 UTC]

nice OC's

you put a lot of thought into them, and tried to make them realistic... too many just make OC's that are convenient, like, oh, she was aang and katara's daughter, and now she's avatar...

not that there's anything wrong with that way... just very refreshing to see something thought through a decent amount.

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river-bird In reply to percguy89 [2007-10-29 01:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I did try and put a lot of effort into them, and I am continuing to work harder since I really want their story to kick off well.

I am working on a comic, but I want it to be as "in tune" with the actual story as possible, so I am waiting until the end of season 3 before I begin to post it up.

Hey I am totally part of the other twelve percent as well!

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