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Description A scene from my story Scarlet River!

Riverpaw was having a bit of a hard time, but with some comforting words from her mentor, Ashheart (not in the pic), she is able to finally put her mother to rest.

Page:  Scarlet River P96    Riverpaw couldn’t bear it. Turning, she fled to the tunnel, all the while choking on the lump in her throat. It’s not her, it’s not her. She chanted to herself, but the image of Shard…no, Windspeaker, sitting in the den could not be wiped from her mind.
    Ashheart followed her as she quickly scrabbled through the tunnel.
    “Riverpaw, wait!” he called.
    When she emerged, pushing past the bush, the brisk wind caught her pelt and she gasped, breathing in the cool, moist air. Without realizing, tears were streaming down her face and she sobbed quietly. It’s not her… Riverpaw tried to convince herself. Cloud warned me. It’s not her… She thought, but tears continued to drop to the rocky floor.
    Ashheart emerged and stood beside her,
    “Riverpaw you can’t just run off like that!” He said ste

Characters: Riverpaw (brown silver-striped she-cat), and Shard (calico she-cat/River's Mother)

Hope you like it!

A few people asked me to draw this scene, and I actually was already working on it.

Watch Speedpaint: www.youtube.com/watch?v=zhszDE…
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Comments: 173

Lavenderwind [2017-12-13 22:10:24 +0000 UTC]

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you(( im sry

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FeistyTadpole In reply to Lavenderwind [2018-06-26 03:13:08 +0000 UTC]

You... Know this is just chain mail... Right?

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HHHAAAPPPYYY In reply to Lavenderwind [2018-05-23 18:27:46 +0000 UTC]

shut da f up

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ajqrocks [2017-10-06 10:46:57 +0000 UTC]

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you(( im sry

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DarkSpirit678 [2017-08-26 21:32:05 +0000 UTC]

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you(( im sry


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Scourge-Female [2017-04-10 04:44:52 +0000 UTC]

So sad

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silvermistfeather [2016-08-12 20:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Where is shard's missing ear

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Stsaddraws [2016-07-09 18:53:24 +0000 UTC]

I cried when she got prisoned XD

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CocoFreeze [2016-06-04 16:52:27 +0000 UTC]

I read this part of the story and I cried..............😭 soooo touching

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raccoonxwolf [2016-06-02 23:47:55 +0000 UTC]

JAMAA

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Feralwolfart [2016-05-21 09:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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wolfuna [2016-05-13 22:55:32 +0000 UTC]

nice

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ScarletHeartss In reply to wolfuna [2016-05-30 21:32:37 +0000 UTC]

i found a jammer

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carebere [2016-05-03 01:35:33 +0000 UTC]

i watch the video of it it AMAZING i watch your videos river spirit i love  

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tiggers23 [2016-04-03 23:38:25 +0000 UTC]

This part made me so sad because it made me realize that even my mom is eventually going to die, and there is absolutely nothing that I can do about it... Yet I know that she'll never leave me, so that made me feel a little bit better...

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VulpineShadows In reply to tiggers23 [2018-06-27 06:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Even though this is an older comment, yeah it makes me sad too

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XXbrighteclipseXX [2016-01-07 21:46:04 +0000 UTC]

No stars in shards fur?

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Cherry13lossom In reply to XXbrighteclipseXX [2016-01-20 01:07:29 +0000 UTC]

i guess not..

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XXbrighteclipseXX In reply to Cherry13lossom [2016-01-20 20:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Well she didnt beleive in starclan so...

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Grofflin [2015-12-28 21:56:38 +0000 UTC]

River, you son of a gun you stole Ashheart from me  

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Ewarriorcat [2015-10-19 20:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Poor Shard! I was like, "NOOOOOOOO DON'T DIE NONONO NONONONONONO

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WarriorCatsFanArt01 [2015-10-15 23:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Awww this is so sad ):, but so touching...

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BloodSoacker [2015-10-09 20:18:38 +0000 UTC]

You do not get how close I was to crying at that part QWQ

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Rainpool777 [2015-09-18 22:39:20 +0000 UTC]

I remember your old style! So pretty

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Deinomyte [2015-09-11 04:28:37 +0000 UTC]

Did her mom die?

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RiverSpirit456 In reply to Deinomyte [2015-09-17 03:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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Deinomyte In reply to RiverSpirit456 [2015-09-17 03:28:40 +0000 UTC]

That's sad.......

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Jay569 [2015-08-20 20:43:09 +0000 UTC]

sweet mother daughter moment...yay! tears filled my eyes when i saw this

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TheCupcakeMaster369 [2015-08-19 15:59:55 +0000 UTC]

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you

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RavensEclipse22305 In reply to TheCupcakeMaster369 [2015-08-20 14:56:55 +0000 UTC]

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TheCupcakeMaster369 In reply to RavensEclipse22305 [2015-08-22 12:59:47 +0000 UTC]

STFU I DO WAHT I WANT

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RavensEclipse22305 In reply to TheCupcakeMaster369 [2015-08-22 13:21:11 +0000 UTC]

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TheCupcakeMaster369 In reply to RavensEclipse22305 [2015-08-22 13:56:33 +0000 UTC]

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RavensEclipse22305 In reply to TheCupcakeMaster369 [2015-08-22 13:59:35 +0000 UTC]

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TheCupcakeMaster369 In reply to RavensEclipse22305 [2015-08-22 14:09:03 +0000 UTC]

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RavensEclipse22305 In reply to TheCupcakeMaster369 [2015-08-22 14:11:18 +0000 UTC]

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TheCupcakeMaster369 In reply to RavensEclipse22305 [2015-08-22 16:28:22 +0000 UTC]

>:3
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Lol

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thehollyraven [2015-08-08 15:35:57 +0000 UTC]

I got a request Draw these guys (there my characters and plus I was gonna make this a commission but then when I saw the price/da points i Changed it so yeah) Characters are: Icefang: white grey black calico (she's mine so yeah)with greeen eyes Dawnstar: Black and white she cat with green eyes (because she is Icefangs sis ) Snowpaw: Snow White he cat with blue and green eyes Deeplake: calico she cat with orange eyes (she sorta looks like riverpaws mum) and darkheart and fireclaw: Bright ginger he cat with jet black paws and (darkheart) grey she cat with Black stripes and a white under belly (she's fire claws mate) story: fireclaw and darkheart are out for a walk while all the others are watching them from trees sadly (because dark and fireclaws son (echo paw) died from a badger so those 2 only have three kits but they didn't know but dawnstar and the ones in the trees did) done 

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TeraStormTAS [2015-07-31 06:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Your art is just so adorable... owo

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TheMightySnail [2015-07-19 12:09:57 +0000 UTC]

T^T WHHHHYYY THE FEEEEELZ!!!

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iSkySpirit [2015-06-23 19:40:36 +0000 UTC]

God, the feels.

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MysteriousGamerGirl [2015-05-16 11:57:20 +0000 UTC]

HER TAIL LOOKS SO FLUFFEH OH MY GOD

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FeatherMoon4501 In reply to MysteriousGamerGirl [2015-06-14 23:35:00 +0000 UTC]

ikr!

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MysteriousGamerGirl In reply to FeatherMoon4501 [2015-06-15 00:03:20 +0000 UTC]

I JUST WANNA PET IT

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FeatherMoon4501 In reply to MysteriousGamerGirl [2015-06-15 20:22:29 +0000 UTC]

Yash. I JUST WANT TO SQEEZE IT LIKA PILLOW PET.

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MysteriousGamerGirl In reply to FeatherMoon4501 [2015-06-15 22:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Y E S
THEY SHOULD MAKE RIVER'S TAIL INTO A PILLOW PET

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FeatherMoon4501 In reply to MysteriousGamerGirl [2015-06-16 00:25:21 +0000 UTC]

yup squishy toy

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MysteriousGamerGirl In reply to FeatherMoon4501 [2015-06-16 00:27:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god
Yes
Please
PILLOW PET GODS
PLEASE MAKE THIS

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FeatherMoon4501 In reply to MysteriousGamerGirl [2015-06-16 00:30:08 +0000 UTC]

yesh god plz!!

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MysteriousGamerGirl In reply to FeatherMoon4501 [2015-06-16 00:36:31 +0000 UTC]

PLEZ GUD

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