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RiverSpirit456 — SR Comic: Pg 33

Published: 2018-04-20 05:00:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 25773; Favourites: 607; Downloads: 29
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Description Deeplake, unfortunately you are correct. XD

Hope you like it! 

Pg 34: SR Comic: Pg 34

Pg 32: 

Pg 1: SR Comic: Pg1 *Redone*


Original version (for those who still want to read/compare the old pages, I won't delete them) : Scarlet River: Pg 1


Written Version:  Scarlet River P1        The moon was a sliver in the sky, only dimly shining on a winter night. Darkness clung to the snow-covered forest below; deep shadows lying beneath the bare, black branches. Through thick swathes of snow a young cat struggled forward. Her head barely cleared the surface of the cold, white substance, and her brown, silver-striped coat was plastered to her sides, revealing a jutting ribcage. She had been running for many suns and moons now, relying on instinct and a darker resource...one that the kit tried hard to ignore.      
        She took another faltering step, her paws numb.  I have to get help. She thought faintly. Her next paw-step slipped, and she fell into the icy drifts, weakly shivering. Through half-closed eyes, she stared up through the bare arms of the trees. The sky was dark and clouded, the claw-like moon half covered. She struggled to stand, but there was no strength left in her thin, bony le
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Comments: 29

LakefeatherHamilton [2019-02-16 20:56:14 +0000 UTC]

You'll be back....









im not sorry

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GAYSWILLRULE [2018-04-25 06:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Only 2 frames left before a totally new page *-* 

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wolfpacklover4 [2018-04-23 15:01:37 +0000 UTC]

love this comic so much, cant wait for next page

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VulpineShadows [2018-04-23 02:25:33 +0000 UTC]

(link for next page not showing up for me) Here's the next page for it:

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FlareTheWerewolfs In reply to VulpineShadows [2018-05-11 05:32:14 +0000 UTC]

That's the previous 

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WarriorcatsPerson In reply to VulpineShadows [2018-04-24 20:30:39 +0000 UTC]

you would mean previous?...

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Wolfstep00 [2018-04-21 14:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Omg this a amazing! 

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Fizzy-Sweets [2018-04-21 12:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Poor River looks dead

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Snowymylittlerabbit [2018-04-21 12:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Why does deeplake looks so evil on the second thing?

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kumquatcat [2018-04-21 04:59:37 +0000 UTC]

aha, cue the dreaming (just a guess, idk)

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Unsocialized-Cat [2018-04-21 04:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Spoopy

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Sparkcloud2117 [2018-04-21 00:15:54 +0000 UTC]

What do you use to draw ur comics?

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caroch430 [2018-04-20 20:45:03 +0000 UTC]

I fricken swear her eyes are GORGEOUS!!!!!   

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mystic-eclipse17 [2018-04-20 18:03:37 +0000 UTC]

how'd just the week feel so long XD

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WarriorcatsMaplespot [2018-04-20 14:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Whoa... dim eyes.... how?

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Wolfgardians [2018-04-20 13:25:07 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING as always ;3

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xXTakenControlXx [2018-04-20 13:08:50 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing River -//w//-

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CedarPaws [2018-04-20 12:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me, or is the comic layout’s color different? It used to not fade into gray right?

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RiverSpirit456 In reply to CedarPaws [2018-04-20 12:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Grey to black transfers into a dream

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CedarPaws In reply to RiverSpirit456 [2018-04-20 13:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay. Btw, hi River .

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Lilacuity [2018-04-20 12:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Hereeee commesss the spooky lady

Dream time river? Gl

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ScarletsWarriorsWiki [2018-04-20 11:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Poor River all she wanted to do is to sleep! Nope! Not on ThunderClan's watch! They're going to give her amnesia as a welcoming present! How sweet, huh?

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12greenboy123 [2018-04-20 10:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Rivers mind: begone gay thoughts

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yewforia [2018-04-20 06:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Another annoying sound is gonna scream at River, I just know it 👀

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starstruckroman [2018-04-20 06:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Deeplake you silly correct kitty

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sugarashes [2018-04-20 05:19:37 +0000 UTC]

Funny how we are only on like Pg/Ch 2 in terms of comics, yet you’ve written Ch/Pg 75

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Luckyrose5 [2018-04-20 05:14:45 +0000 UTC]

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ScribbleSpirit [2018-04-20 05:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Whoop! Can't wait for more

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RayJayO [2018-04-20 05:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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