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RiverSpirit456 — SR Comic: Pg 59

Published: 2018-10-19 05:00:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 20533; Favourites: 529; Downloads: 24
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Pg 60: SR Comic: Pg 60

Pg 58: 

Pg 1: SR Comic: Pg1 *Redone*

Original version (for those who still want to read/compare the old pages, I won't delete them) : Scarlet River: Pg 1


Written Version:  Scarlet River P1        The moon was a sliver in the sky, only dimly shining on a winter night. Darkness clung to the snow-covered forest below; deep shadows lying beneath the bare, black branches. Through thick swathes of snow a young cat struggled forward. Her head barely cleared the surface of the cold, white substance, and her brown, silver-striped coat was plastered to her sides, revealing a jutting ribcage. She had been running for many suns and moons now, relying on instinct and a darker resource...one that the kit tried hard to ignore.      
        She took another faltering step, her paws numb.  I have to get help. She thought faintly. Her next paw-step slipped, and she fell into the icy drifts, weakly shivering. Through half-closed eyes, she stared up through the bare arms of the trees. The sky was dark and clouded, the claw-like moon half covered. She struggled to stand, but there was no strength left in her thin, bony le
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EdenTheSmolMushroom [2020-09-24 10:28:35 +0000 UTC]

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anomy-meow [2019-02-14 20:05:54 +0000 UTC]

why is he being so mysterious

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Tigerclaw014 [2018-10-19 23:33:33 +0000 UTC]

She looks so nervous, poor baby. Everything will be alright River! 
Lightstar wont bite. =^^=

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PoisonRose321 [2018-10-19 16:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Whats up with her in the 2nd panel

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Broccoli-Sheep In reply to PoisonRose321 [2018-10-19 23:27:12 +0000 UTC]

She's scared, nervous in fact

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PoisonRose321 In reply to Broccoli-Sheep [2018-10-20 02:17:58 +0000 UTC]

K

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Starmoon9 [2018-10-19 16:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Go one riverfall-i mean riverp- river







(yes I did that on purpose #spoilers )

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Sarah014 In reply to Starmoon9 [2018-10-21 23:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Spoilers
Deep breath......: internal chicken scream.

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Starmoon9 In reply to Sarah014 [2018-10-22 03:49:37 +0000 UTC]

...

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KittyHawk456 [2018-10-19 12:23:07 +0000 UTC]

For some reason I had a dream that after River talked to Lightstar, she freaking bolted out of the camp as if she was being held hostage by Thunderclan and almost the entire clan was chasing after her.

Don't ask me how that would be possible, my mind is freaking weird.

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Broccoli-Sheep In reply to KittyHawk456 [2018-10-19 23:27:46 +0000 UTC]

I mean.. you're not that off

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KittyHawk456 In reply to Broccoli-Sheep [2018-10-19 23:28:52 +0000 UTC]

what do you mean?

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Broccoli-Sheep In reply to KittyHawk456 [2018-10-19 23:42:07 +0000 UTC]

She realized that big buffy buffalo was taking her to Lightstar's den.

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KittyHawk456 In reply to Broccoli-Sheep [2018-10-20 00:55:11 +0000 UTC]

pffft true XD

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mystic-eclipse17 [2018-10-19 11:30:09 +0000 UTC]

seeing this page made me a little less deppressed about having a test today, thank you

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TheGirlThudnerWolf [2018-10-19 11:18:29 +0000 UTC]

CLAP CLAP CLAP ANOTHER GREAT PAGE

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MyrkTheCat [2018-10-19 10:15:33 +0000 UTC]

I love how everyone is so mad about the grey cat (forgot his name oops) calling River a "rogue". This is how life was back in the day, such as in Celtic Europe. Yes, a tribe would care for a child who lost its way and was in need, however, they would not simply accept it immediately, as it is indeed an outsider, and the tribes value their lineage. This isn't racism or being unfair; it's simply trying to maintain their tradition and their ability to exercise their own ancient rites. Yes, one should be sensitive, however, a great warrior is not coddled and treated as a delicate bird. This is a comic, guys. 

says it's a comic after writing a really long post about proto-Celts and Celts in ancient continental and insular Europe

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Briyoedoe23 In reply to MyrkTheCat [2018-10-19 10:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Hopefully people won't freak out when they read this.

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MyrkTheCat In reply to Briyoedoe23 [2018-10-20 15:50:13 +0000 UTC]

Right? Lol too many overly sensitive people. Now, I'm sensitive and I don't condone being insensitive; however, you can't be offended by e v e r y t h i n g

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Briyoedoe23 In reply to MyrkTheCat [2018-10-20 16:38:49 +0000 UTC]

Sammeee I'm sensitive to some things and I'm emotional wreck BUT it doesn't mean I will pout or cry about everything! And I would like to think myself as a very understanding and agreed able person!

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MyrkTheCat In reply to Briyoedoe23 [2018-10-20 21:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Same tho. I tend to be a bit too judgmental but I'm working on it.

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Briyoedoe23 In reply to MyrkTheCat [2018-10-21 02:57:50 +0000 UTC]

its ok! we all have to work on things! 

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ThetrueFebruary31 [2018-10-19 05:05:37 +0000 UTC]

She's a baby wtf, calm your shit

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ShadowLeafRiver In reply to ThetrueFebruary31 [2018-10-19 05:13:11 +0000 UTC]

"The rogue" show a little respect to the main character! 

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