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lu--24 [2015-09-07 18:20:29 +0000 UTC]
I really like the atmosphere in this piece. It gives the idea that she's training in the middle of the night in a dismissed gym, and I enjoy the feeble light a lot. It's warm and it gives shape and consistence to everything in the picture, and the shadows are soft but definite, so great job on the colouring and lightning!
I also like her expression and the dynamic pose, and the feeling of movement and strenght it gives. The only thing that lack a bit in it is the sand coming out from the sack, it would have been a lot more impactful if you pictured it spaying in a more dynamic fashion, even if a bit exaggerated, since you're working with a comic style.
About the anatomy, the thing that looks off to me is mainly her arms, wich are small in comparison to the rest of the body. The fists included. It looks particular strange in this piece because her arms are one of the main focus, because she's boxing. But I'm sure it's a thing you'll be able to fix easily in your next drawings.
Overall, great work! I almost feel like going boxing now
On behalf of ProjectComment
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RoamingDragon In reply to lu--24 [2015-09-08 13:24:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoy the lighting and shading. I could see what you mean that the sand could be a bit more dynamic. As for anatomy, I'll get it down. It's a bit tough to fully comprehend, but I'll learn with time on proportions. Thank you for the advice and commenting on my piece.
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RivanGarve [2015-08-29 17:00:19 +0000 UTC]
This is an really interesting and detailed piece, i can see you greatly understand lighting and shadows. Things you can do to improve are work on proportions and perspective and maybe work on how to draw different texture elements such as sand.
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RoamingDragon In reply to RivanGarve [2015-08-29 21:03:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I can see what you mean on proportions and texture, though not too much on perspective.
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RivanGarve In reply to RoamingDragon [2015-08-29 21:13:06 +0000 UTC]
So the perspective of room looks okay, except maybe the ring in the back kind looks stuffed into a small room, i would have maybe moved that a bit forward or made the room longer but the main problem is the floor, kind of looks to steep.
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RivanGarve In reply to RivanGarve [2015-08-29 21:15:03 +0000 UTC]
actually looking at it now it's the line in the bottom right that makes it look like that, my bad, your perspective is actually okay, it's just proportions.
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RoamingDragon In reply to RivanGarve [2015-08-29 21:47:16 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Thanks for making that clear, but now it's time for me to work harder on proportions and human figures. I've been reading up on it, so I'll be ready with practice. Thanks again
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British-Prophetess [2015-08-27 19:30:05 +0000 UTC]
The room/setting is one of the things that caught my eye when it came to this drawing and I have to say it's really well developed, especially the lighting and the girl's shadow too. Very impressive work overall!
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RoamingDragon In reply to British-Prophetess [2015-08-29 00:42:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the kind comment! Glad you love the background and the elements.
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IllusriArt [2015-08-23 21:32:15 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, wonderful composition you have here! I love the detail you put in the background and the lighting on this is very impressive indeed. She is one strong lady! O-O <3
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RoamingDragon In reply to IllusriArt [2015-08-24 02:08:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad you like the lighting and her power.
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AntheaEvans [2015-08-22 14:34:56 +0000 UTC]
You have a great handle on the lighting in this pic and it looks amazing, just had to say that! ^.^
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Jose-Ramiro [2015-08-22 03:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Sandra Equihua? The co-creator of 'El Tigre'?
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RoamingDragon In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2015-08-22 03:27:58 +0000 UTC]
That's right! She created the female characters of the show. I loved watching El Tigre and the popular girls were oddly enough my favorite characters. So, I just give them a little more spotlight and credit Sandra Equihua. She's so great!
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Jose-Ramiro [2015-08-22 03:24:05 +0000 UTC]
Hey, neat.
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