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Robbe25 — Urkradach heavy rifle Hydra

Published: 2012-02-06 11:25:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1873; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 36
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Description We first met the Urkradach in 554 G.A. (Galactic Age), Until then, we had found no trace of other sentient species and had settled on numerous planets... virtually unopposed. We were rather advanced by then, we had mastered FTL travel, terraforming and other technologies...

But against the Urkradach, we were more or less helpless anyway.

We had first contact with them on Agamemnon, a mineral-rich world we intended to mine. Apparently, the Urks (as we came to call them), had the same idea, and they weren't to happy to see us. The entire exploration team of 500 women and men - scientists, miners and a detachment of soldiers - was wiped out almost to a man.

Fortunately, if one can say that we were fortunate in this desaster, there were holographic recordings of the attacker. We saw our enemy...

They were all very tall (2 - 2.50 meters), clad in suits of armour, all wielding massive rifles with what seemed like a dual ammo feed. We couldn't see more than that though. We only saw that.. and their ruthless, even cruel, attack. They made no distinction between civilians and soldiers... It is still chilling to the bone, even after all those years.

But what we didn't know then: That one act of merciless slaughter was only the beginning.

More curvy.. this time with a story (or an attempt at one). I plan to expand the story further, so feedback on it would be most welcome!

Inspired by the Gorgon pistol from GoW.
Done in PMG 0.6.
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Comments: 21

ZoMb1e-M4N [2012-02-18 01:52:19 +0000 UTC]

how it is possible to do these kind of things in 0.6 is amazing, you are a PMG legend

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Robbe25 In reply to ZoMb1e-M4N [2012-02-18 15:19:28 +0000 UTC]

It's fairly easy... all it takes is some practice, and of that I have plenty

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scottellison92 [2012-02-08 08:40:37 +0000 UTC]

that one would scare the fools that stand before you!

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Robbe25 In reply to scottellison92 [2012-02-08 08:57:00 +0000 UTC]

It should

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Masateru47 [2012-02-07 01:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Awesome gun, best advice I can give you for the story: spell check disaster.

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Robbe25 In reply to Masateru47 [2012-02-07 07:24:06 +0000 UTC]

That bad? I didn't notice anything.

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Masateru47 In reply to Robbe25 [2012-02-08 04:02:40 +0000 UTC]

I was just pointing out disasters (desasters)
you use a different lang keyboard though don't you? Also, the story is great, but it's the writing it self (my english and screenplay writing teachers really got to me in my senior year), I'd be willing to re-write the story entries if you'd like.

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Robbe25 In reply to Masateru47 [2012-02-08 07:26:00 +0000 UTC]

I simply confused the German spelling (which is Desaster) with the English.

The only difference between my keyboard and an English one (the one that matters anyway) is the position of z and y. On a German keyboard z is where y is on an English one, and vice versa.

I'd be happy if you re-wrote the stories, so I can see where I made mistakes . I don't know how you want to do this, but you can post them in your gallery if you want... just mention me for creating them or so

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Masateru47 In reply to Robbe25 [2012-02-09 07:59:46 +0000 UTC]

nah I'll note em to ya. honestly I just like writing.

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Robbe25 In reply to Masateru47 [2012-02-09 08:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Ok. Thanks for the help anyway. It's much appreciated!

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Blackhawk2955 [2012-02-07 01:04:03 +0000 UTC]

looks vicious :3

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Robbe25 In reply to Blackhawk2955 [2012-02-07 07:24:16 +0000 UTC]

It's supposed to

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543Bs0Za [2012-02-06 17:39:32 +0000 UTC]

bayonet would look good on this one too

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Robbe25 In reply to 543Bs0Za [2012-02-06 17:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Just didn't think to try one for this gun.

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Epicsunrise [2012-02-06 17:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Awesome lore to suit an awesome gun!.This thing is crazy cool.

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Robbe25 In reply to Epicsunrise [2012-02-06 17:34:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks mate

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Gunnut51 [2012-02-06 13:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Usually, when you start a story , it gets fun to see what you come up with.

Moar, please!

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Robbe25 In reply to Gunnut51 [2012-02-06 13:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Apart from the Great Outbreak, I've never really written stories for my guns. But I will continue this particular story...

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Gunnut51 In reply to Robbe25 [2012-02-06 14:17:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm basing it on that.

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Fred7162 [2012-02-06 12:46:01 +0000 UTC]

The story is good. And the gun is cool aswell.

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Robbe25 In reply to Fred7162 [2012-02-06 13:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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