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RobertoCarmona — batman page 20
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page 20 of my portfolio ., uff has been a long road since I started with the first page ., pencil and ink are mine. 11 x 17 inches in bristol cardboard., criticisms and comments are accepted pagina 20 de mi portafolio de secuencias , a sido un largo camino desde que comence con la primera pagina , hecho en cartilina opalina en 11 x 17 pulg ,se aceptan flores, criticas y comentarios /// thanks for the favorite///Related content
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It's a good piece, but it seems a little disjointed from panel to panel.
In the first panel, Batgirl is the darkest thing on the panel. It seems like there would be reflected light, illuminating her from the headlight of the motorcycle, and the darkest parts would be the sky.
You could really combine the second and third panel together, instead of separating the shot to the tire, and her reaction to it. Use like a camera angle from below the bike, maybe. In the next panel, have the bike start to get wobbly, and hard to steer and the following panel, having her jump off, and the next series of panels of her rolling away from a crashed bike.
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agree with you on some of your opinions. I think I will be very helpful in the future pages , thanks for your comment.
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Thank you very much for your comment!
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thank you very much!
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Batgirl or Batwoman? Going by the cycle, I'd say Batwoman.
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Batgirl , Batwoman much like
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