Comments: 6
Gin-Palace [2011-03-28 22:57:47 +0000 UTC]
I really like this *heart* The choppy yet organized stream of thought is powerful. "They expect the weather will be nice next year/or so. Or so we're told." Love the ending!
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DarkestStarlight [2011-03-27 09:52:32 +0000 UTC]
I feel like the tempo is almost.... tidal. Ebbing and flowing, fast in the multi-line stanzas and then a pause for thought at each single line. Very nicely organized.
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