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RockerByBaby — Lost Soul Lullaby by-nc-nd
Published: 2011-03-26 18:56:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Lost souls travel @ the speed of blood
too thick. Fear follows @ the speed of smell
of sick. Weekend @ Sonny's will fix everything
'till then.

It's a gamble @ everyone else's expense.

They speak in circles, they expect the World
revolving 'round their hips. They walk
their underdogs, everything
is handed to them; why grasp
the concept in the long run
@ their fingertips?

It's a gamble @ the rest of their expense.  

Free falling from their downfalls,
we'll just have to see how it goes.
Easy way out is all that's going
down this road. Smell of death
lingers in the fabric of their clothes.

They expect the weather will be nice next year
or so.

Or so we're told.
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Comments: 6

Gin-Palace [2011-03-28 22:57:47 +0000 UTC]

I really like this *heart* The choppy yet organized stream of thought is powerful. "They expect the weather will be nice next year/or so. Or so we're told." Love the ending!

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RockerByBaby In reply to Gin-Palace [2011-03-30 18:26:01 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that, makes my day better Thanks much good friend!

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DarkestStarlight [2011-03-27 09:52:32 +0000 UTC]

I feel like the tempo is almost.... tidal. Ebbing and flowing, fast in the multi-line stanzas and then a pause for thought at each single line. Very nicely organized.

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RockerByBaby In reply to DarkestStarlight [2011-03-27 20:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Hey it does, creative input. Thank You.

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RadientEdenOasis [2011-03-27 03:38:45 +0000 UTC]

I love this!

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RockerByBaby In reply to RadientEdenOasis [2011-03-27 03:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank You

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