TwilightsFall [2005-09-11 22:09:27 +0000 UTC]
Good rhyme scheme..some words misspelled such as lose (loose) Keep up the great work!
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RosuttoAkki In reply to TwilightsFall [2005-09-11 23:12:35 +0000 UTC]
lol yeah i should do spell check before i post stuff huh? well actually i think the spell check ruined me with that word lol! but thanks for the fav!
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Rumdiculous [2005-09-11 16:15:59 +0000 UTC]
I still think this is the best one you've written yet. It's beautiful, sad, and has the visual equivalent of a picture book.