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RosuttoAkki — Black Saddle

Published: 2005-09-11 05:54:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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Description Black Saddle

When u went away it felt like forever,

Till the day we’d be together.

I stayed here, trying to cope,

Willing myself  “not to loose all hope”.



I longed to feel those loving arms,

Always, they protected me from harm.

The pain I felt, I could not endure,

I sobbed as I fell onto your floor.

I longed to see my prince’s face,

Knowing, it never to be the case.



I drempt of you a fort night past,

Willing that night would last.

I prayed for your safety far away,

Return to my love, one day.



The dream I had, now so faded,

My beauty is now far outdated.

So long ago I got the letter,

We could never be together.

You died with honor, deep in battle,

You fell lifeless from a black saddle.



At night I feel you brush my skin,

I wonder where you have been.

I hear your voice upon the wind,

Telling my broken heart to mend.

I sing to you, can u hear?

Your love still takes away all fear.



I wish no longer to feel this pain,

My tears flow as if bloody rain.

I will join u this very hour,

Once the poison has reached full power.

Now we shall be together,

The perfect chance for our forever.

~~Kelly Craig Sept.10, 2005~~



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Comments: 3

TwilightsFall [2005-09-11 22:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Good rhyme scheme..some words misspelled such as lose (loose) Keep up the great work!

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RosuttoAkki In reply to TwilightsFall [2005-09-11 23:12:35 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah i should do spell check before i post stuff huh? well actually i think the spell check ruined me with that word lol! but thanks for the fav!

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Rumdiculous [2005-09-11 16:15:59 +0000 UTC]

I still think this is the best one you've written yet. It's beautiful, sad, and has the visual equivalent of a picture book.

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