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Ephira [2014-08-17 02:33:38 +0000 UTC]
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Okay, first I'll say that this is truly a gorgeous piece. The detail is obvious, and even though it's in the anime/manga style, there are many different pieces that are put together to make up the work, and that's truly inspiring for those of us who are still trying to find our feet and our own artistic style.
As for what I'd like to critique, I think that the shading could be a bit more consistent. When you first look at it it looks fine, but when you really start thinking about it and looking closely, the placing of the shade and the light doesn't really make sense. Is there more than one light source? And if there is, why aren't there double shadows caused from the opposing lights? I mean, parts of the shadow seem like it's coming from the left, others from the right... or perhaps above? I don't know, it kind of confused me, anyway. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>
The hand, also, is a little too small. I understand that it was probably done for the kind of overall feeling of the girl being petite, but if you hold your hand up to your face it usually covers at least half of it. The sharpness of the collarbone is also a /little/ too exaggerated.
Like I said, there are a lot of good things to say about this art piece as well, but a critique is about finding things that can be improved, right?^_^
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Anbi-ART [2014-05-14 18:36:58 +0000 UTC]
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The drawing is an example of an exeptional use of syncretism concerning techniques of drawing. The combination of manga and semi-realistic style is quite challenging to be made properly. In this case, the final result makes an indescribable first impression.
What requires pointing out is that the general idea is not outstandingly original. However, there is nothing wrong with the concept and it is also realised really well. Staring at the drawing, I feel at ease. It is very calming and peaceful which absolutely pleases me.
What definitely can be classified as an advantage is lighting. It truly gives the feeling of experiencing underwater world. It is quite soft, giving an impression of depth. There are just a few little spots that could be fixed, although they do not show much and are hard to notice. Also the use of red and greenish blue make the drawing look even more interesting. They match astonishingly well and bring a lot of harmony. While details like bubbles, shading on the shoulder and the flower on her left hand show how much work has been done to achieve such a beautiful result.
There are just few imperfections that attracted my attention after a while. Some parts of the lineart (especially on hair) show up a bit too much. I think they are supposed to indicate the structure of hair but, unfortunatelly, they do not really match with the lighting used here. I also wonder if the eyes match each other. However, since it is partly manga, it can be excused.
In conclusion, I think we have come across a true masterpiece of digital art. The breathtaking concept, original style, outstanding realization and appealing the male part of visitors lack of outfit make an amazing impression which deserves the highest rating.
Dear Rosuuri... Great respect! I wish I could achieve your level one day e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Kyuuana [2014-05-14 18:20:15 +0000 UTC]
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The feeling this picture gives you is very calm, and very graceful. The colors are go together very well, and blend almost perfectly with everything. I like how vivid the eyes and the bubbles are, since the eyes are usually the focal point of a person/art.
I really like how the color in the hair gets bluer and more transparent as it goes back, it adds a lot of creativity to the picture; I don't see a lot of it anywhere.
I do think that in a few spots, the line art in the hair doesn't meet and the color goes out, but it wasn't noticeable until I saw the picture up close. The shading was done very well, especially in the hair. I think you defined many features excellently and that it was colored beautifully.
Overall, I really like it. It gives me a good vibe, it's drawn, colored and put together very well.
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Riskiich [2017-11-27 05:29:13 +0000 UTC]
Cool
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JaydenTivon [2017-11-26 03:50:09 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully cute!
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SkylarMinx [2017-01-15 09:58:42 +0000 UTC]
Hey! I was bored and needed to practice but wasn't feeling very creative. I redrew this with a micron in my own way.
It such a fun composition thank you for sharing. I hope it's ok that I used it to practice and if you have any issues with me selling the sketch please let me know and I won't.
fav.me/davh2lh
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akaFila [2016-10-28 23:47:01 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful
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bbbhyt [2016-08-22 06:27:37 +0000 UTC]
thats amazing
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DogMiruku [2016-06-26 19:29:53 +0000 UTC]
I love the bubbles! The color is so amazing!!
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bamboo-fan [2016-05-07 04:11:05 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful your digital skills are amazing.
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Pittree [2016-03-22 15:23:10 +0000 UTC]
Love it
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SparklyRaccoon [2016-01-09 17:57:44 +0000 UTC]
AMAZING. One of my favorites! I wish i could draw like you >.>
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chubbybunnycherrychu [2015-11-13 22:58:33 +0000 UTC]
I love this picture!!!!
The texture and felling that was added to it is perfect!!
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titonka [2015-09-19 17:38:04 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful!!!
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xMafi [2015-08-16 20:16:34 +0000 UTC]
ohhh you are amazing!!!
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SakuraGirl111 [2015-07-01 20:12:15 +0000 UTC]
this picture is very pretty i like it very much
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Nuttelaaddict44 [2015-04-30 00:46:19 +0000 UTC]
I love how the hair looks a bit like koi fish! Beautiful piece!
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ProfessorLenah In reply to Eibashi [2015-09-28 14:10:23 +0000 UTC]
UGH , WHAT A JERK!!
I HATE IT WHEN PPL DO STH LIKE THIS!!!
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Sugarcoatings In reply to Eibashi [2015-05-17 13:58:29 +0000 UTC]
I was really agitated by the fact that he / she erased the fricking watermark
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Eibashi In reply to Sugarcoatings [2015-05-17 14:33:46 +0000 UTC]
I can see why, I would be agitated as well.
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Mayukari [2015-04-08 15:00:02 +0000 UTC]
I find it amazing how you did the water bubbles so realistic. In fact, all the drawing itself was impressive. I am an amateur designer, but I hope one day to get close to their level of art, is definitely fantastic !
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FlicKitty [2015-04-04 04:15:09 +0000 UTC]
that is really awsome. i like how she is ho,ding a bubble, that is really clever. i also really like the colours in it. good work
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Miss-Nekoo [2015-03-28 11:51:20 +0000 UTC]
it beautiful! ^^
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hupposama [2015-03-18 02:10:50 +0000 UTC]
This picture is so amazing!!! will you be opening commissions again?
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Stardust3256 [2015-02-07 08:43:33 +0000 UTC]
That's so cool!
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AnimeShadow34 [2015-01-28 03:38:10 +0000 UTC]
so cuuuute X3
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MilesDood [2015-01-27 13:00:19 +0000 UTC]
This is really nice, I'm liking the serene atmosphere and the warm colors even though it's underwater.
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monion [2015-01-06 23:46:51 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing - Breathtaking!!
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DeuxDubstep [2015-01-04 03:32:19 +0000 UTC]
I'm gonna be an annoying fan and ask this, how can I get the line-art to look as good as that?
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