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rotten-jelly-babie — RAVEN AND BEAST BOY

Published: 2010-05-14 19:15:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 7087; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 103
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DerpInc [2013-09-19 03:18:24 +0000 UTC]

I wana see what comes next~

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Mayleef [2010-09-25 14:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Planning next pages?

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rotten-jelly-babie In reply to Mayleef [2010-09-26 18:49:45 +0000 UTC]

yh i am where the rest walk in on them we'll there
h/*aveing a moment XD

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Mayleef In reply to rotten-jelly-babie [2010-09-27 08:25:30 +0000 UTC]

D'awww You're evil1 Ilike it

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me-n-pet [2010-05-15 14:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Cool, this is a pretty good comic, all the character's expressions are really well done. However, the English is a little...unconventional.

1st panel: "Hey hey hey"
3rd panel: "Where is everyone?"
4th panel: "On a mission."
6th panel: "So you couldn't break anything while they're gone, duh."
7th panel: "Heh." (I can't imagine BB saying "Ho".)
9th panel: "Hey, do you know where the remote is?"
10th panel: "You mean this thing?" or "This thing?" (Again, Raven wouldn't say "Ho" unless she's being sarcastic about something stupid BB'd say.)
11th panel: "Gimme gimme gimme"
13th panel: "Whoa!"

Will there be another page?

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rotten-jelly-babie In reply to me-n-pet [2010-05-15 16:36:41 +0000 UTC]

thanx n am not that good at spelling sorry

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me-n-pet In reply to rotten-jelly-babie [2010-05-15 18:53:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm just glad you took it well. Some people would've been angry.

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rotten-jelly-babie In reply to me-n-pet [2010-05-15 19:09:04 +0000 UTC]

yh i know i need to work on it so next time i'll use spell check

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