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royjoemana — moon and bolt

Published: 2009-11-08 22:00:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1073; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 39
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Description this is their only hapy memory untill they severed ties. one going down a path of darkness, the other goes down a path of light. they are scorge's kits. the idea to bring these cats to life are me and ~toasterfox

warriors belong to erin hunter
moon and bolt belong to me
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Comments: 16

Oshawott222 [2013-05-01 22:25:24 +0000 UTC]

I love them.

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Rankumander [2011-01-26 12:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Aww...

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WolfRiddle [2010-10-24 04:08:17 +0000 UTC]

cute picture i love the black little kitty ^^ i want to hug it ^^

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CelestialRibbon [2010-05-19 05:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Critique

Pros- Good Things
The white kitten, Bolt(?), was successfully drawn in such a way that he looks like he's standing on a flat surface even though nothing is there.
There's a quote on it-
"Moon & Bolt
The only happy memory".
Not a lot of people would think to write something like this on their artwork. It makes the viewer (or at least me) wonder about their history other than them just being siblings.
This style is relatively easy to use to mess with and work on to develop your own style.

Cons- Needs Improvement
The black kitten, Moon(?), was colored much to dark a shade. I can't see the lines and can't tell how exactly he's posed.
The ball that the white kitten is about to swipe at is lopsided in shape. You could even trace around a small cup or other round object to correct the shape.
Their eyes look a bit odd. There's no pupil or highlight in them at all, nor is the shape of them a circle.

Comments
You did a good job with the picture. This is definitely a style that you could work with successfully. Keep it up, keep practicing. It's good for you.

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royjoemana In reply to CelestialRibbon [2010-05-19 06:24:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks. I'm trying to work on Eevee right now.

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CelestialRibbon In reply to royjoemana [2010-05-19 06:29:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Just pretend that I didn't italicize about 90% of that comment. >_>

Cool, good luck.

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Nina-13draco [2010-02-28 05:20:42 +0000 UTC]

They is cute ^w^

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BlindSnail [2010-02-17 01:11:20 +0000 UTC]

lol adorable!

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MasterIceberg [2009-11-14 13:04:14 +0000 UTC]

It be sad if these two were seperated D:

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royjoemana In reply to MasterIceberg [2009-11-16 17:26:53 +0000 UTC]

they went down two different paths after this. Bolt ( the white one ) went down a path of evil. Moon ( the black one ) went down a path of justice.

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toasterfox [2009-11-11 02:44:06 +0000 UTC]

awesomeness pure awesomeness!

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royjoemana In reply to toasterfox [2009-11-16 17:27:12 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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toasterfox In reply to royjoemana [2009-11-17 03:10:04 +0000 UTC]

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xemnasthehedgehog [2009-11-09 09:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Hm, pretty cute ; P does remind me a bit of ying and yang ;D

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royjoemana In reply to xemnasthehedgehog [2009-11-16 17:28:19 +0000 UTC]

I kinda did that for a reason. Moon ( the black one ) is a good cat and Bolt ( the white one ) is the bad cat.

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xemnasthehedgehog In reply to royjoemana [2009-11-16 17:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha awesome

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