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rpmsauron — Mermaid Chant

Published: 2012-02-22 20:09:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 320; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description A photomanipulation I did from a friend's photograph.
Image resources are original or freeware stock.
She is Isabelle Batz, a professional Fashion Designer:
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and the original photo can be seen here:
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Take your time to browse her website and find awesome artpieces of clothing!!
Photomanipulation: 4 hours
Finalization: 20 minutes
2012
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Comments: 2

Lumaris [2012-02-27 08:06:26 +0000 UTC]

I feel that there is too much going on with very little depth of field. Everything appears to be rendered out evenly, from the ship to the girl, to the water, to the moon. The composition looks a bit "thrown together" (although I'm sure you put thought into it, I just can't think of another way to describe it. I apologize if it sounds a bit brutal...). I'm a huge fan of cold color schemes, but I just feel that this is too-blue. I think the issue is "what's the focal point?" Because everything seems to be rendered out fully, and everything is pretty large, in a sense, the eye is bouncing through subjects, trying to figure where to focus first. It's a matter of hierarchy. Everything's fighting for it.

It's a cool idea, nonetheless, and I'm no pro. I'm just sharing my thoughts. Keep it up.

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rpmsauron In reply to Lumaris [2012-02-27 15:14:02 +0000 UTC]

Well the focal point was meant to be the girl in the mists, while the rest of the elements are just meant to be adorning. I've also just started working photomanipulations devotedly for two months.

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