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Ruleroftheblind — Daydreaming
Published: 2004-12-29 18:06:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description You hold it back
away from your arm
Holding it back
saving from harm

But slowly you feel
your pulse start to race
You can feel it there
the cold sweat on your face

Your armed hand lowers
touching your wrist
The now victim hand
becomes red mist

Suddenly you realize
that the blood doesn't seem
to be very real
because it's all just a dream.
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Comments: 6

squiter [2006-09-24 08:16:21 +0000 UTC]

well written I like the referral to it being like a dream.... blacking out.... dream same diff. Ne wayz great job. great perspective on it.

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PendilumOfDreams [2005-03-10 18:01:07 +0000 UTC]

This one is short and nice, and abrubtly stops, but it all fits because so does the dreaming...I like it

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VincentsQueen [2005-01-06 04:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Very good...hehe...brillant.....

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grayfoxninja2001 [2004-12-29 18:08:22 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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Ruleroftheblind In reply to grayfoxninja2001 [2004-12-29 18:13:10 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thanks!

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grayfoxninja2001 In reply to Ruleroftheblind [2004-12-29 18:57:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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