Kara-Yami [2017-11-06 00:04:53 +0000 UTC]
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First of all, the background is awesome! great colors and everything! The boy is very clean and well drawn! The hair is very well done, nice darks and lights. I would suggest (if it works for you) to not put so many hard lines in. If you choose to leave it, it still works very well! Absolutely adore the eyes, and face all together.One thing I would change is the shadow in the neck, it should be the same amount of softness and blended as the face and hair. At first, I thought the red undershirt was very distracting, but the more I look at it, the more I like it. Its a nice color break from the clothing and the background. compositionally I would edit out the ribbon coming in front of his arm. Either that or add more. Overall, great job! CritiqueCorner
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rumilky In reply to Kara-Yami [2017-11-06 20:18:12 +0000 UTC]
OMGGGG thank you for your critique!! It's really objective and helpful!! I never realized that I drew such harsh shadow on the neck part. I really appreciate it! Once again thanks! ^w^
Kara-Yami In reply to rumilky [2017-11-06 23:02:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh no problem at all! ^-^
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