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RunnerGuitar — BSC Thumb: Trauma Center: Second Opinioin (Lewis)
Published: 2014-01-24 22:32:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1991; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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If Blue screen was a disease, Lewis would have died by now. This is the 3rd part of my BSC thumb project. Only one more part and then the thumb it self! while the wall lack a bit of detail, it works in its favor, specially with the shading. Poor Lewis, never gets a break. Leslie will have to save him!...I like how I drew her, I feel like I'm getting better at drawing women. I mean, look at that body!
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Lewis is a commentator in Brainscratch Comms
Leslie (c) Atlus
Trauma Center (c) Atlus
Art (c) RunnerGuitar
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Comments: 2
Your overall drawing could improve, the chair, Lewis, Leslie and the table looks 2 dimensional to the point of it being silly, your anatomy needs work as well, as the arms for both Lewis and Leslie looks too thin and too long, not to mention, their shoulders look weird. also, the table looks a bit messy.
however, there is one thing i must compliment and that is the coloring and overall shading, it looks great and its consistent as well.
the idea was good, but do work on the things that i stated could need work, and don't hesitate to ask friends or family for honest opinions.
i hope my thoughts can be helpful to you.
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And Here I thought it was the opposite problem. It's interesting that those are the things that you see in my drawing and I thank you for making the critique. It means a lot to me and I can see what you mean 
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