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mokemke [2013-11-05 05:15:28 +0000 UTC]

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Hello~ Nice to meet you xD I thought I'd critique this because I was scrolling through the critiquable and this was probably one of the best that wasn't photography~
The whole headshot-with-the-breaking-apart-at-the-bottom is a really simple idea for a drawing, but you used the effects really well! Many people, probably including me, have no idea how to make the text and the bottom of the headshot look like that, as well as many other little details. Nice job with the angle too~
One thing I think you could've easily changed was the lineart. A lot of times it seems like something no one would care about, but here I think you could've made it a bit thinner or something. Thicker lineart(at least to me) gives off a more playful feeling, if you get what I mean xD In a picture that's meant to give a more sad feeling, it could look better with really thin lineart or none at all. Especially with the small details of the face like the nose and lip, it'd be better to show more shading than lineart.
However, I really like this! I shall look more at your account :3
Nice to meet you again!

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Daviinc [2013-12-18 18:18:31 +0000 UTC]

awww no llores TwT

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Koyukistyle [2013-11-06 08:07:50 +0000 UTC]

RUMY TU Y TUS AVISPAS sadasdasdasd
-yocomentandosupertarde-
asdsadasd me encanto enserio :c
te quedo precioso

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SUU-ITOGARU [2013-11-06 02:24:28 +0000 UTC]

esta hermoso

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superalvichan [2013-11-05 22:42:37 +0000 UTC]

porque sera que lo deprimente siempre sale cool a ojos de otros? D:

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VinyTheWolf [2013-11-05 21:31:50 +0000 UTC]

se parece a Dissapear of Miku Hastune XD pero te quedo Genial :3

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Nemigi [2013-11-05 18:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Muy lindo el dibujo pero re triste ><, es hermoso el efecto que lograste expresa muy bien  y de forma clara los sentimientos, no puedo expresar con palabras todo los sentimientos que me transmite pero sobre todo tristeza, decepción y una mirada perdida TT//TT, muy lindo la verdad ^^

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Primrose-Rachel [2013-11-05 10:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Eres una gran artista, logras subir tantas buenas imagenes en tan poco tiempo   ojala yo pudiara hacer lo mismo   te admiro mucho

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saikias956 [2013-11-05 05:32:23 +0000 UTC]

De verdad, no sé como logras cosas tan preciosas en tan poco tiempo OTL

benditas sean tus avispas 

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LetOuTheBeast [2013-11-05 05:01:14 +0000 UTC]

-Se le tira encima- 

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