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Yutobital7 [2024-04-04 20:38:43 +0000 UTC]
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Mikeruler17 [2023-11-14 21:44:21 +0000 UTC]
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A-Ron1990 [2023-01-04 01:19:09 +0000 UTC]
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kaido1224 [2022-01-12 21:50:26 +0000 UTC]
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gothansayan [2021-10-16 19:43:36 +0000 UTC]
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asari13 [2021-04-13 17:58:27 +0000 UTC]
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Saturnshii [2021-02-20 10:32:22 +0000 UTC]
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CassyHattori36 [2020-02-04 07:25:11 +0000 UTC]
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This image is gorgeous! I'd say the only flaw is the guy's hair (I'm sorry I haven't watched nor read Demon Slayer yet, so I don't know his name, only Nezuko because memes.) I've seen a few imaged so I know it's suppose to be that colour, but the shading does not look as soft or seem to fit with the rest of the image, even though it's correct. I would just soften the lines for the darker part of the hair next time, so it fit with everything.
My favourite part is the composition. It's been so long since art classes, so I have a vague idea of what composition is exactly, so I can't tell you what's the best about it, so I'll talk about what I know and can put into words. I love the lights in Nezuko's eyes. They are like her brother's, but lighter and more sparkly, obviously because of the moon, but it also give the sense that she isn't human and it's just also a great Shoujo effect. The lighting is spot on. It actually looks like they're walking under the light of the full moon. I love that the background is blurred, but the characters are not. They're the focus and it brings it out.
Basically put, this whole image is breathtaking and out of the works you've asked me to review, this is your best one. Please keep up the good work! You're doing great!
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RyuseDraws In reply to CassyHattori36 [2020-02-04 08:17:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique!
I'm glad that you found this piece to be gorgeous XD
From what I understand the composition is alright along with the lighting and effects to make the characters the focus and that Tanjiro's hair shading needs more work.Β
I'll do my best to take note of that in the future and make sure everything fits well together
Thank you again for your critique :3
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RyuseDraws In reply to MommaCabbit [2020-02-03 07:19:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your critique again
I'm glad that you enjoyed the colors for this piece XD
Yeah hands are difficult for me back then >.<
I should've paid more attention to it and used less lines.
Thank you for your suggestion
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RyuseDraws In reply to stiatent [2020-01-29 16:51:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique!
From what I understand, I'm doing well in terms of colors, expressions, and lighting for this piece and that for background my intentions were not very clear XD
Thank you for pointing out those areas of weaknesses and strengths!
I'll take note of them and adjust my future pieces accordingly
I'll also do my best to keep up the awesome work :3
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RyuseDraws In reply to Chronologyx [2020-01-25 07:45:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique!
I'm glad that you found this piece to be beautiful XD
Thank you for pointing out the things I did well in so I know to keep doing them in the future and improve upon them
I'll do my best to keep making more!
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Bioteknos [2020-01-25 03:37:25 +0000 UTC]
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I have not watched that anime and I guess that's the reason why I don't see so many interest in both characters. Having said that, both expressions in eyes and body, and al the atmosphere you made there, gives a huge impact in a viewer (at last, as alwys with my background, maybe others disagrees). she looks sho helpless but I can say she hides some kind of power or energy (like Baby Yoda: cute but lethal).
The effects on water and all those plants in the road... I mean, is a beautiful scene, and your colors confirms that. I can't do anything but say congratulations. Of course, my main critiques are about the idea of a fanart (Is good, is great, but I've seen them so many times...). But that's just my opinion and as I've said before, is not law written in stone e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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RyuseDraws In reply to Bioteknos [2020-01-25 07:48:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for taking your time to critique my work!
Thank you for showing me areas I did well in XD
Now I know to continue doing them and improve them further
I'm slowly trying to make more original pieces but fanart just gives me more traction >.<
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RyuseDraws In reply to LadySionis [2019-11-15 00:12:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique!
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RyuseDraws In reply to OtakuRhi [2019-11-12 12:40:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique! I really appreciate it.
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xwowo999 [2020-06-05 23:50:27 +0000 UTC]
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BluePotatoChips101 [2020-04-18 10:29:50 +0000 UTC]
I donβt know a lot about this anime (Because iβm 10 and donβt watch any anime at all) but i love it!! ^w^ i live the calming vibe itβs giving off.
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teh-neko [2020-03-15 06:59:16 +0000 UTC]
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