Comments: 30
copycatloki [2009-09-17 21:02:30 +0000 UTC]
Hilarious XD
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jimborox1 [2009-02-21 18:59:50 +0000 UTC]
this comic is so cute! great work! the one thing im wondering is where the guys denim jacket goes by the fourth frame xD
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FreakWolf [2006-11-11 19:45:31 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what to say...just a word go across my mind...LOL!XD
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BoGilliam [2006-09-14 14:56:01 +0000 UTC]
Oh my..Oh no...I didn't get it. o_o I'm seeing everybody laughing but I. ^^" That's a little embarrassing, actually.^^"
But I do like the way you organized the panels and painted. ^^ Good work!
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ryuumajin In reply to camelchild [2006-09-08 11:11:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for liking it I'm trying to make a new story of these one-off comics, hopefully, to be sold.
Actually, like the genre says "Doujinshi", this comic is made based on another comic, made by Vince Suzukawa. You can see the original in here: [link]
In case you want to know what it is, check this one first: [link]
Some pages have been "previews only", because the full editions (have been 2 series so far) have been sold in internet and furcon. But you can see some newer pages in the update of this journal, so if you like the original comic, you can be a member of livejournal and join the community to read the continuation.
Have fun, and thank you for having a good laugh on my comic
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pipid [2006-09-07 16:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Idenya lucu...
tapi storytellingnya, agak rancu sama pergantian waktunya...
masih kurang kebaca... kurang jauh closurenya
sama penempatannya masih kurang enak.
lagian 2 tokoh penanya itu kok mirip,
tadinya gw kira 1 tokoh.
tapi warnanya dah lumayan.
backgroundnya bisa diperlembut lagi warnanya biar ga terlalu nabrak sama tokoh.
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btw... tokoh yang tadinya pake rompi napa jadi ga pake rompi lagi di panel selanjutnya ??
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AAAAH... wakatta...wakatta...
ternyata tokoh yang sama, si penanya itu, ganti2 baju...
mungkin anda ingin menandakan perbedaan hari yah ?
sayang sekali jadi agak gagal dalam storytellingnya (baca buku visual storytelling, bisa pesen di dkv, murah kok kopian)
Salah satu unsur penting : continuity
Buat komik strip, lebih baik tokohnya jgn diganti2 bajunya...
orang gak ngeh...
masa yang ganti baju cuma 1 orang doang, sedangkan yang laen bajunya sama mulu.
Kalo mau ganti, ganti semua...
kalo tetep, tetep semua...
Jadi ga konsisten tuh...
Pembaca bingung...
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TillWolfster [2006-09-06 23:10:31 +0000 UTC]
ROFLMAO! This is just tooo funny! XD Ryuu you should make more!
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ryuumajin In reply to TillWolfster [2006-09-07 01:57:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. The ideas are still running around in my head.
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Poila-Invictiwerks [2006-09-06 10:28:34 +0000 UTC]
Jake cannot speak properly. And Zach did say something bad... sigh...
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chefcheiro [2006-09-06 09:14:25 +0000 UTC]
mestinya sufurrman kalo mo ngaco sekalian XD btw emang mereka gay yah?
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ryuumajin In reply to chefcheiro [2006-09-06 10:27:10 +0000 UTC]
Iya juga kali ya.
Sejauh yang wa baca, Boris tuh straight, dan Jake tuh Bi.
Detilnya bisa kamu baca disini: [link]
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chefcheiro In reply to ryuumajin [2006-09-06 11:04:08 +0000 UTC]
ya maksud gua si jake ama temennya yang satu lagi (bukan boris n si korban itu) XD
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ryuumajin In reply to chefcheiro [2006-09-06 12:25:49 +0000 UTC]
Kayanya mereka berdua Bi
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chefcheiro In reply to ryuumajin [2006-09-07 03:36:28 +0000 UTC]
weleh.
lelaki yang menyeramkan >.< jangan ampe ketularan aja deh
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seel-dingo [2006-09-06 08:07:24 +0000 UTC]
god i cna't get over how cute you draw that lil alligator ;o;
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ronso [2006-09-06 05:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Lol! This is funny Ryuu! And yeah, I.S.O's one of my favourite comic too! Nice job on this one ^_^
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Dias-Jean [2006-09-06 04:58:57 +0000 UTC]
Omg, I love this comic. Truthfully, maybe make a more continueing series if you already havent. I would subscribe x3 seriously, i love the art and I can relate to the situation.
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