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Published: 2016-07-19 20:37:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 617; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
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and please help meeee, I'm trying to write a cute comic and I can't figure out how you're characters would act. Probably because they're not MY characters lol. Send me a note so we can talk in private.For the rest of you, this is a sneak peek for an up coming comic I've been brewing in my head.
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Of course, I'll be glad to assist.Β
What would probably make it easier for group collaboration is if you made a discussion forum in the admin area.Β That way it would be easier to have three-way communication, plus you could tell both of us the premise in just one place rather than in two notes.Β
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>> ohhhh... I see... well I honestly don't know how to do that... Also do you like how I drew Camille? I'm very proud of it Β
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It isnβt super hard to figure out, all you need to do is go into the admin area and hit the little plus that says submit when you hover over it on the private discussion forum bar.
She looks great in your style, I really love the movement your line art has. I like the way you drew her hair and the sweater, I always have trouble with drawing clothing so I really envy the way you can make clothes look so plush.
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okay I did it, hope I did it right... If you comment I'll know I did it right, but I'm fairly sure I did~
And about the hair and sweater, yeah I'm proud of how I did the hair and ears :3
But you DO draw pretty awesome clothes for your pokes. My favorite outfit being Zelda's <3
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Lily is a laid-back, sassy kitty, but would be absolutely obsessed with not seeming like a dork or nerd around Camille, so she'd probably say things like "I'M NOT PLAYING VIDEO GAMES I SWEAR!" and wind up sounding a bit like a tsundere.
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Okay... how would her dynamic with Nettie be? Mutual respect or rival for Camille's attention??
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Probably mutual respect, she doesn't care about having Camille's affection. She just doesn't want to get kicked out by Camille.Β
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Lol if I didn't know she's got a bite to her she sounds kinda like those meek sidekick characters. Who will put up with any abuse
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Everyone's a meek sidekick character when Camille's around. XD Though when Lily's on her own, she's much more sassy and tough.
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*nods nods* :3 Anything else that'll give me a better idea of how to write her character in this comic?
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Lily, without Camille = Lazy slacker with a sass mouth. Secretly a nerdy dork.
Lily, with Camille = "HOLY SHIT SHE'S COMING GOTTA PUT UP MY 3DS I'M NOT A NERD DON'T KILL ME!"
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:3 Lol how big of a nerdy dork is she? Does she just like video games?
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She also secretly likes sci-fi books and movies, which would be a HUGE red flag to Camille.
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Aw so she hides them whenever Camille's around hm?
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Yep, usually in her purse, or if she's panicking, she'll throw them over to David.
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