MynaOphelia [2011-06-12 13:31:35 +0000 UTC]

this is pretty eerie, I like it!

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3wyl [2011-05-17 14:02:31 +0000 UTC]

I feel you're missing a punctuation mark after "chants"... perhaps you could put a colon or a comma... or even a semi-colon if you want.

The end could do with a full stop as well, but other than that, it's quite an interesting piece! I guess the lack of punctuation could suggest that this is a continuous thing, but eh.

Seems somewhat demonic.. almost as if the person is in purgatory or something. o.O

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