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Sabaku-no-hana β Impossible Love
Published: 2009-09-07 20:39:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 8044; Favourites: 198; Downloads: 2052
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----------------------------------------------------------------This is a Love Story,
She is in love with him,
He is the cold Mr. Winter,
She is the warm Ms. Spring,
They are too far, and too close.
She Cant be with him,
If she get close she becomes Autumn and dies,
that's why she'll never tell his feelings and
her tears becomes rain all the year.
She never lose her hopes
and makes every year beautiful flowers for him
But they always die before he can take a look at it.
She only wants to be with him,
Trying to make it possible, but
is it worth even if is not?
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xD Yaaay~ I've been thinking this art too much time and i finally did it!
This is the 50% of the pic, Tool: SAI + CS3 + wacom
Hope you like it.
[Edited] I edited the txt, sorry, my English is not that good xD.
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Comments: 39
Of all the pieces in your gallery, this is definitely the best. It is evident that you have also spent a great deal of time on it, as it has a significant amount of beautifully intricate detail, such as on the hair strands and flower corsage.
You have made good use of Photoshop (?) brushes for the backgrounds and textures. The polarity of the two characters is thoughtfully conveyed, both in the composition and the colour scheme. The autumnal warmth of the blushing girl juxtaposed against the wintry stoicism of her lover works wonderfully. The anatomy of the two characters is pretty good - I particularly like the position of her hand resting on his cheek; it looks delicate and intimate. A red rose and scarf bring the picture together excellently; I think this is an original and intelligent addition.
If I were to make improvements to this myself I would change the position of the leaves on the left-hand side so that they swirl around the figure rather than drift downward through the air; this would be more atmospheric, in my opinion. Something about the female's head seems a little off; the placement of the eyes would be further forward so that the tears would perhaps be rolling down differently. The nose and mouth seem disproportionately tiny on the face and her chin seems too large.
Other than those minor criticisms, I think this is just lovely. You should be very proud of this piece!
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I really appreciate your critique, I love it,
It makes me try harder to improve more my skills,
I know what are you talking about when you say there's something weird with the boy, i think is because I'm not
used to draw them, is like something really weird for me, i guess is because in all my pics I'm trying to put the current feeling of the moment type of thing and me as a girl..well, is like representing myself. I'll definitely work harder on it.
Thank you very much, I really appreciate that you are the person that gave me my first critique. <3
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Don't worry! I find males difficult to draw, too. 
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Seeing this art n reading the text makes me wanna cry
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absolutely adore!
did you come up with the Winter & Spring story? Or is it from something else? Please tell me, I'd love to know more! ^-^
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Hi, I used "your art" in my compilation of
Sweetest Anime Pairings Artworks: "How Sweet it is to be Loved by You"
It may take a while to load. You can control F the title to locate it.
Please tell me if you don't want it there, but I really REALLY LOVE it so please let me keep it in the list. I have linked it to the source and stuff if you press the image so I'm not stealing.
If you have other suggestions to make the list better, just tell me.
Thank you and more power!
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it is just like Zero X Yuki from vampire knight
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vimpire knight? I gotta see it >3> *google*, and thank you =]
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Mr.Winter's hair kinda same like zero. btwy, awesome artworks! XD
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No, i should thank you^^
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this is beautiful~<3
u have been featured [link]
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Looking at this, at first, it looks simply amazing, then clicking the picture, enlarging it, I get to go in and see the sublime details, like the rose she wears, or his slight somewhat-smile. Good work.
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Thank you very much for your comment
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No problem at all, keep up the good work.
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i want to critique it too. cuz i really wanna help and make it even more beautiful cuz i really like this piece XD it's so light and flowy and warm and everything... darn.. i'm not subscribed X<
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Its ok
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Que lindo trabajo (me pasΓ© por tu pΓ‘gina principal y me dΓ cuenta que hablas espaΓ±ol = D )
Me gusta mucho los colores que utilizaste, y la textura que tienen... ademΓ‘s de que el concepto es muy lindo, aunque algo triste...
Gran trabajo!
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aww muchas gracias
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Jenny approves : DDDD!!!
The hair, the details in the rose, the background,
all goes in harmony <3333!! Fave n_n!!
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