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Published: 2007-02-21 23:31:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Weep and cry my beloved
Weep and cry
For I am as I am
For eternity bound
To life’s cruel Earth
For me I ask you to
Weep and cry
Weep and cry my beloved



Legend had it that the statue had been standing at least eighty years before the cathedral was built around it. It was an interesting statue, cold and pale. This statue was of a girl, head bowed, arms outstretched and standing rather aquwardly with her long black hair draped over her shoulders covering most of her face and naked body.
The church stated that the statue was of an Angel taking flight, her wings were just ‘invisible’

Two hundred twenty years the cathedral stood. NO one knew the artist, nor did anyone dare to touch it. Not even the caretakers, and the skin that once gleamed white, and the hair that once shined black, were dust covered and dull.

Though no one would touch it, everyone who came to see the cathedral came to see the statue, for the statue gave an eerie yet exellerating aura about it. As if rage and pain circulated within it’s stony frame, if the frame was stone… no one had touched it recently enough to know what the statue was made of.

This was how it was until a group of American high school students came to Europe on a class trip. One among them was a tall dark haired male by the name of Sean. When they came to the particular part of Europe that the statue stood, they of coarse wanted to see the ‘dark angel’ as it was commonly referred too.

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ironicallie [2007-02-24 18:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Prologue

arms aoutstreached and standing rather aquardly with her long black hair drapped over
outstretched akwardly draped?

NO one knew the artist,nor did anyone dare
No artist, nor
that might be a double negative too.. i don't think so...

nor did anyone dare to touch it. Not even the caretakers
one sentance

the skin that once gleamed white, and the hair that once shined black, were dust covered and dull.
second sentance, also, were should be was

for the statue gave an erie yet exellerating aura about it.
akward syntax and what is exellerating

As if rage and pain circulated withen
as if weakens prose within

it’s stonic frame, if the frame was stone…
at first i thought that said stoic and thought that was cool... but is it stone?


of american
American

they of coarse wanted to see the ‘dark angel’ as it was commonly refered too.
of course or naturally perhaps? reffered to

very strong begining to your story, it sounds like it will be beautiful, great descriptions. a few stylistic things maybe.

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brokenseraphim [2007-02-24 08:11:19 +0000 UTC]

If you want, I can type quite fast. I could type this up for you. And it gives me a chance to read it before it's posted XD

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SailorZ360 In reply to brokenseraphim [2007-02-27 20:17:15 +0000 UTC]

yes That would be wonderfull... there is just the hand writing and the fact I'm not finished with it yet to contentd with... but yes that would be awesome...

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