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SailorZ360 — Jealousy
Published: 2006-05-22 17:15:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description I thought I shouldn't lose it,
I thought I didn't care,
but I did...
i did care.
It shouldn't pain me but it does.
It hurts to see, watch, then look away,
Trying to ignor an impossible truth.
Nails grinding;
women screaming;
thunder rolling;
rain pooring;
claws slashing;
fangs nashing;
My heart... bleeding...
my heart is bleeding, torn... burning on the floor.
My tears fall for a lost cause.
Wars have been fought...
though only with myself,
for I will NOT fight with another...
I look away trying to ignor it,
But I know it's impossible,
for even when I look away...
My dreams take me to your place,
Only to be torn back into harsh reality.
Jealousy is an ugly thing...
for you, for me, for him...
I envy you... for now I dream to take your place...
I'm sorry.
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Comments: 5

NUMBGURL [2006-12-15 21:48:01 +0000 UTC]

I really like your work, you and I think alike so much. It's dark and I like it!

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NUMBGURL [2006-12-15 21:46:42 +0000 UTC]

I really like your work, you and I think alike so much. It's dark and I like it!

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ironicallie [2006-12-15 05:49:25 +0000 UTC]

wow... except for spelling ignore oddly i really like this... if i were to ever publish my story i'd be honored if you'd let me put this (attributed to you of course) on the begining pages... I remember reading it before perhaps, and you reading it to me on the phone... but it really struck me this time

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SailorZ360 In reply to ironicallie [2006-12-15 16:54:39 +0000 UTC]

I would really like that!!! That is the one poem that I was telling you about on the phone.... this is a very emotional poem for me... Thank you very much... of coarse you have permission to use it, I don't care so long as I get credit for it!

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ironicallie In reply to SailorZ360 [2006-12-16 17:52:34 +0000 UTC]

^-^ Yay!

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