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Saisuki In reply to WhiteGamma [2010-04-08 23:22:26 +0000 UTC]
lmao, i know. she didn't have really have white hair, but I think it's easiest to call it white a pale purple = white = too lazy to call it "a light lilac" I did use white at some point, because I was trying to convince myself that the yellow was yellow and not white. I swear, it seemed really white!! I have a big fat headache right now, it's killing me. Random, I know. I didn't even finish my homework because it hurts so much.
Yeah, I tried a million different stories. I have had a year and a half of thinking, so I hope it's good. but i feel it will be mary-sue, especially when you see Hidetada, and Grimmjow right before his Hollowfication. It will be so easy to see that I am trying to let the readers know without blatantly pointing out that Hidetada = Grimmjow. Or will be. Or might be. That's what I'm contemplating. She sounds mary-sue to me because of that, and also because of Mofuku. He is a great sword, maybe too powerful. I came up with another sort of good one awhile ago (it was one of Yumiko's many zanpaku-to, until I got this one), and I think I'm going to use it for a male OC, who has no name or face And then I came up with a great one for Toki!!!! But Toki doesn't have a face yet, either.
(skipping around, sorry)
LMAO. You think that her hair cut is not girly?!! I thought it was outrageously girly!! the two senbon was added on a whim. I have always tried to add it to Saisuki (original Saori) but I think I got too lazy or something but I like it here. Plus she wore something like that in her earthly lifetime, you'll see. someday Thanks I am so proud of my zanpaku-to and its command >///< so unshamedly proud! unshamedly is not a word, but please ignore that I like Toki's too. But I don't know the Japanese for her zanpaku-to yet, so >.< oh! it's senbon needles. I know they're quite thick. The norm would probably to have three, but they were a last minute addition. I just stuck with two after that But Mulan-like kimono is all I ever do >///< even with Saisuki!! And probably will with Saori!!
Thanks! Sure, go ahead It'll definitely feel weird to look at your OC being named Kitsuki, as I have images of my Kitsuki and her sue-dom, but I'm sure I could get used to it in time! Do you know Kitsuki's zanpaku-to or what seat/division she's in? Or is she an arrancar so she can be Aizen's bishie?
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WhiteGamma In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-10 16:35:36 +0000 UTC]
Well but it IS yellow
The headache part really was random Aww I have no idea so I can't really comfort you ( <--- has never had a real headache )
*headdesk* I hadn't even noticed that Hidetada is supposed to be Grimmjow Now come on! ONE mary-sueish part and she already is mary-sue?! Then what's Ayane?! Goddess of the mary-sues?! ......okay that's not a good comparison since that's another fandom XD
Geez, if I read right then she doesn't even have Bankai D: That makes her anti-sue! X3 And that means you can give her some mary-sueish features. So the story is good! >w< I don't wanna hear the contrary D<
Oh male OC sounds good to me Does he already have a girlfriend? hehe
Who the heck is Toki? D: I'm feeling left out, did I miss something? XD
(we always skip around ya know X3)
No, it makes her look younger, that's true, but doesn't look girly to me. Oh that's senbon, okay XD I'll see, someday... (I don't doubt that I'll get to see that before you see my OC XD)
NP Be proud, it sounds awesome My sis and I have been trying to find a good command for my OC's zanpaku-to and came up with idiot stuff and better stuff but you should have heard!
(Who is Toki? TTwTT) Yeah, they are a bit thick but who cares? Does anyone care about Matsumoto's too big boobs? Nope, I don't think so Nii-san doesn't mind a bit
Myu, but Mulan-like kimonos don't look bad anyway XD
Yay! She's gonna be the suedom so you won't have to get used to something different
I'm still thinking about that, I need to finish Bleach before I make up my mind I guess. But at least she has a name now. In the beginning I wanted her zanpaku-to to be a spear until I saw that baldy-san already has one, so shit, my idea was already old XD Then I went to two blades, but I didn't like the idea XD So I stuck with a normal sword
Hey, don't laugh I've actually been thinking about this! But that already stinks of mary-sue so no, I thought she'd be a shinigami XD
Oh can you guess her love interest? I bet you'll never guess
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Saisuki In reply to WhiteGamma [2010-04-19 15:25:34 +0000 UTC]
Well when I was on the computer coloring it, I couldn't tell, even if I changed the brightness on my computer.
Well, it's not very obvious, is it? Not with what I've written. I recently watched the Bleach movies, one of them being the Memories of Nobody. Shinigami aren't supposed to remember their past, and I don't think that Arrancar are supposed to either. I still have to make an excuse around that. No, no, no, we reserve the title, Goddes of the Mary-Sues, for Hiota and Shizue and people like them. 8D Well, yes, but so what if she doesn't have a Bankai? Rightfully so! By the way, it pisses me off that everyone else seems to have a Bankai and is a Vizard too. Really? There's only supposed to be Shinji, his crew, and Ichigo!!
LOL. He doesn't have a girlfriend, not that I know of. Nor does he have a face or a name XDDD I'm going to write it down here, because I think I already forgot it. But one of the zanpaku-to I might be talking about is like an enslavement zanpaku-to. It binds Hollows to the owner to do as he bids, and when the owner dies, he either joins the Hollows bound to the sword as a Hollow, or he allows the Hollows to have his soul. The problem with option number two, though it makes more sense, is that I think it's like the Taiki in The Twelve Kingdoms. I don't remember. Toki's is using friction and converting it to energy. This one is my favorite I think. She has a very, very long sword, and she drags it aroudn with her. The sheath acts as a battery charger from all the walking around. So when she pulls it out, she can swing and it's powerful as is, but after she dispenses the energy, it's lost, and she needs to charge it again. Oh! Toki is the sixth seat of the thirteenth division and is Yumiko's closest friend.
Well senbon needles should be thinner. Haku used them, remember? Of course they don't look bad, I'm just afraid about the originality.
lmao XDD In bleach they said only Ukitake (13th Captain) and Shunsui (8th Captain?) have twin blades, but then Shuuhei (9th Vice Captain)'s Kazeshini also has two blades. I want Suzumebachi. I think that's why I came up with Mofuku. so that Yumiko can try to mimick Suzumebachi XDD If she is a shinigami... I'd be thinking something like Shuuhei would be her love interest. Shuuhei, Renji, Byakuya, or Aizen. I contemplated Gin for a moment, but no. You cannot not suport Gin x Rangiku XDD
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hparrott97 [2010-04-07 01:06:18 +0000 UTC]
its really good ^^ and tho the background is plain i like how the top part is shaded and says ur name. her background story is really good too^^ i feel bad for her, tho... i hope she finds the man she loves soon
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hparrott97 In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-08 00:35:37 +0000 UTC]
i always forget the background too ^^ by the time i get to it its just... whatever... and i REALLY hope she finds him ^^ i love happy endings... and no problem!!
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hparrott97 In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-08 19:23:51 +0000 UTC]
ok that works!!! ^^
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hyperdark06 [2010-04-06 23:10:00 +0000 UTC]
nice do u rp
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hyperdark06 In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-07 01:14:59 +0000 UTC]
i see well i could rp with u
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mchemfan [2010-04-06 09:16:30 +0000 UTC]
This looks beautiful and I adore her back story.
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mchemfan In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-06 11:43:53 +0000 UTC]
Not at all I adore everything about her, her zan paku to has me especially intrigued.
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Saisuki In reply to MingJu [2010-04-07 11:25:36 +0000 UTC]
THE TOILET LA IS THE LULZ. 8D
& the legasp is so cute X3 Haha, kind of off-topic there That's good to hear. I hope you've had good sleep? I never quite realized, but a lot of people that I watch seem to be depriving themselves of sleep between school and art. Sheesh, school just doesn't know when to stop Awww, that stinks, the assignments thing.
Um, okay, I guess. I have three tests on Monday, which is sort of strange, because I think my teachers at least try not to put tests on the same day. Today I have two exams, too. Which I didn't really study for Homework is taking me a lot longer than usual. It used to be that I'd be on teh computer by five, but yesterday it was like six forty and other days it's gone basically to dinnertime. But I feel as though I have less homework than usual. I don't get it
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MingJu In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-07 13:20:02 +0000 UTC]
well that's the odd, bit ahahaha it is only 9:19pm right now XD I ain't a sleep yet lol, I just got outta the gym! ahahaha XD
I know ;__; I am so busy but I will leave it to the last week of the holidays Q___Q cause I havent had anytime to draw very much so I am drawing as much as I can before school starts
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Saisuki In reply to MingJu [2010-04-09 01:42:29 +0000 UTC]
I know X3
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AleSan [2010-04-06 02:29:14 +0000 UTC]
i have no idea of bleach 8D.
but anyways, the art... mmm yeah, you kinda screwed out with the BG :/, maybe if you added some grass so the trees wouldn't look so plain, also some shadows to the wood.
the dirt is too clear... some rocks would be nice ;D.
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