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Saisuki — Condense, Mofuku

Published: 2010-04-06 02:15:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 3340; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
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Yes, yes, I know the background fails. I had no idea what to do! I feel as though I have ruined all the hard work of the two wonderful artists who made the brushes I used. >///< sorry!

Anyways, here is my bleach oc, yumiko! she was originally named kitsuki okami. if you have any issues with my oc, please talk to me. the only evidence i really have of her existence all this time is the inital image i drew of her. i don't think i dated it, but i hope you can tell by the very poor anatomy that it was from awhile ago. she was alive before the christmas of 2009, because i was working on an amv project, where i was already drawing the form when she went to hueco mundo. the sue-version anyways as i am so uncreative and cannot seem to stray from the mulan-like center on basically any kimono-like garment i have drawn, i have thus repeated the style she was intially white-haired, but i changed it to blonde when i realized she was starting to look like ayane minamoto.

name takashiro yumiko
age 470 years (2nd oldest in her division)
date of death November 25, 1545 @ 15 years old
division thirteenth division, twentieth seat
zanpaku-to mofuku (wind-based)
zanpaku-to command condense, mofuku
ability shikai it can create a semi-solid replica of any person. she can only imitate what she has seen, including the way one uses his/her reiatsu. for instance, she could use hitsugaya's bankai. however, she cannot as she is not familiar with his reiatsu or his zanpaku-to. she can only do a semi-decent imitation of gin's shinso, shikai only, and unohana's healing abilities (not her zanpaku-to). she has a pretty good grasp on the zanpaku-to of shiba kaien, rukia kuchiki, a girl named toki in the thirteenth division, and some other thirteenth division members. she cannot replicate anyone's bankai to date. she will not achieve bankai, and she is the second user of this weapon.
lifetime wish she had loved a man named hidetada in her earthly lifetime, who died by her side the night they were murdered by the same man (i forget his name ). she was saved by a soul reaper and went to soul society, but she does not know what became of hidetada. she has spent hundreds of years looking for him.
role she is a patrol officer in a little mountain village she lived in during her earthly lifetime in central japan. she has only dealt with two or so hollows there, one of which was a soul who she should have sent to soul society, chained to the place where she had died, but hesitated upon his request. he was the first soul she had ever seen become a hollow.

(obviously, she will have something to do with grimmjow )

see also:


tree brushes ~coffinkittie [link]
mountain brush =00AngelicDevil00
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art *Saisuki
takashiro yumiko *Saisuki
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Comments: 40

peek-a-boo09 [2010-07-26 14:41:01 +0000 UTC]

thats cool!

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Saisuki In reply to peek-a-boo09 [2010-07-27 00:15:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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peek-a-boo09 In reply to Saisuki [2010-07-27 14:02:14 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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Pancake-Senpaii [2010-04-21 00:22:32 +0000 UTC]

looks great love the scenery and the pose

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Saisuki In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2010-04-21 01:45:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks the bg is terrible, don't lie

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WhiteGamma [2010-04-08 15:14:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you've been thinking about her story a lot haven't you? I mean it's very well done and everything sounds fine and makes perfect sense. I see not one sign of mary-sueness. She's like an anti-mary-sue I'd say But really great job! Her story is awesome!

She really would have looked like ayane with white hair XD (which is nothing to be happy about XDD) but the light blond really suits her, I think better than white would have. It also fits better because of her haircut She's really pretty but doesn't look girly, that's good! Her zanpaku-to looks very cool and I like the command, it really sounds like from Bleach
Don't worry about the Mulan-like kimono XD You hardly notice it, and it's also not as boring as some others' kimonos
But tell me what's that in her hair? some sort of accesoire (sp?)?

Anyway, great job my dear!
I still need to make my OC, I'll have you as my inspiration
If you don't mind, may I name my OC Kitsuki?

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Saisuki In reply to WhiteGamma [2010-04-08 23:22:26 +0000 UTC]

lmao, i know. she didn't have really have white hair, but I think it's easiest to call it white a pale purple = white = too lazy to call it "a light lilac" I did use white at some point, because I was trying to convince myself that the yellow was yellow and not white. I swear, it seemed really white!! I have a big fat headache right now, it's killing me. Random, I know. I didn't even finish my homework because it hurts so much.

Yeah, I tried a million different stories. I have had a year and a half of thinking, so I hope it's good. but i feel it will be mary-sue, especially when you see Hidetada, and Grimmjow right before his Hollowfication. It will be so easy to see that I am trying to let the readers know without blatantly pointing out that Hidetada = Grimmjow. Or will be. Or might be. That's what I'm contemplating. She sounds mary-sue to me because of that, and also because of Mofuku. He is a great sword, maybe too powerful. I came up with another sort of good one awhile ago (it was one of Yumiko's many zanpaku-to, until I got this one), and I think I'm going to use it for a male OC, who has no name or face And then I came up with a great one for Toki!!!! But Toki doesn't have a face yet, either.

(skipping around, sorry)

LMAO. You think that her hair cut is not girly?!! I thought it was outrageously girly!! the two senbon was added on a whim. I have always tried to add it to Saisuki (original Saori) but I think I got too lazy or something but I like it here. Plus she wore something like that in her earthly lifetime, you'll see. someday Thanks I am so proud of my zanpaku-to and its command >///< so unshamedly proud! unshamedly is not a word, but please ignore that I like Toki's too. But I don't know the Japanese for her zanpaku-to yet, so >.< oh! it's senbon needles. I know they're quite thick. The norm would probably to have three, but they were a last minute addition. I just stuck with two after that But Mulan-like kimono is all I ever do >///< even with Saisuki!! And probably will with Saori!!

Thanks! Sure, go ahead It'll definitely feel weird to look at your OC being named Kitsuki, as I have images of my Kitsuki and her sue-dom, but I'm sure I could get used to it in time! Do you know Kitsuki's zanpaku-to or what seat/division she's in? Or is she an arrancar so she can be Aizen's bishie?

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WhiteGamma In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-10 16:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Well but it IS yellow
The headache part really was random Aww I have no idea so I can't really comfort you ( <--- has never had a real headache )

*headdesk* I hadn't even noticed that Hidetada is supposed to be Grimmjow Now come on! ONE mary-sueish part and she already is mary-sue?! Then what's Ayane?! Goddess of the mary-sues?! ......okay that's not a good comparison since that's another fandom XD
Geez, if I read right then she doesn't even have Bankai D: That makes her anti-sue! X3 And that means you can give her some mary-sueish features. So the story is good! >w< I don't wanna hear the contrary D<
Oh male OC sounds good to me Does he already have a girlfriend? hehe
Who the heck is Toki? D: I'm feeling left out, did I miss something? XD

(we always skip around ya know X3)

No, it makes her look younger, that's true, but doesn't look girly to me. Oh that's senbon, okay XD I'll see, someday... (I don't doubt that I'll get to see that before you see my OC XD)
NP Be proud, it sounds awesome My sis and I have been trying to find a good command for my OC's zanpaku-to and came up with idiot stuff and better stuff but you should have heard!
(Who is Toki? TTwTT) Yeah, they are a bit thick but who cares? Does anyone care about Matsumoto's too big boobs? Nope, I don't think so Nii-san doesn't mind a bit
Myu, but Mulan-like kimonos don't look bad anyway XD

Yay! She's gonna be the suedom so you won't have to get used to something different
I'm still thinking about that, I need to finish Bleach before I make up my mind I guess. But at least she has a name now. In the beginning I wanted her zanpaku-to to be a spear until I saw that baldy-san already has one, so shit, my idea was already old XD Then I went to two blades, but I didn't like the idea XD So I stuck with a normal sword

Hey, don't laugh I've actually been thinking about this! But that already stinks of mary-sue so no, I thought she'd be a shinigami XD
Oh can you guess her love interest? I bet you'll never guess

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Saisuki In reply to WhiteGamma [2010-04-19 15:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Well when I was on the computer coloring it, I couldn't tell, even if I changed the brightness on my computer.

Well, it's not very obvious, is it? Not with what I've written. I recently watched the Bleach movies, one of them being the Memories of Nobody. Shinigami aren't supposed to remember their past, and I don't think that Arrancar are supposed to either. I still have to make an excuse around that. No, no, no, we reserve the title, Goddes of the Mary-Sues, for Hiota and Shizue and people like them. 8D Well, yes, but so what if she doesn't have a Bankai? Rightfully so! By the way, it pisses me off that everyone else seems to have a Bankai and is a Vizard too. Really? There's only supposed to be Shinji, his crew, and Ichigo!!

LOL. He doesn't have a girlfriend, not that I know of. Nor does he have a face or a name XDDD I'm going to write it down here, because I think I already forgot it. But one of the zanpaku-to I might be talking about is like an enslavement zanpaku-to. It binds Hollows to the owner to do as he bids, and when the owner dies, he either joins the Hollows bound to the sword as a Hollow, or he allows the Hollows to have his soul. The problem with option number two, though it makes more sense, is that I think it's like the Taiki in The Twelve Kingdoms. I don't remember. Toki's is using friction and converting it to energy. This one is my favorite I think. She has a very, very long sword, and she drags it aroudn with her. The sheath acts as a battery charger from all the walking around. So when she pulls it out, she can swing and it's powerful as is, but after she dispenses the energy, it's lost, and she needs to charge it again. Oh! Toki is the sixth seat of the thirteenth division and is Yumiko's closest friend.

Well senbon needles should be thinner. Haku used them, remember? Of course they don't look bad, I'm just afraid about the originality.

lmao XDD In bleach they said only Ukitake (13th Captain) and Shunsui (8th Captain?) have twin blades, but then Shuuhei (9th Vice Captain)'s Kazeshini also has two blades. I want Suzumebachi. I think that's why I came up with Mofuku. so that Yumiko can try to mimick Suzumebachi XDD If she is a shinigami... I'd be thinking something like Shuuhei would be her love interest. Shuuhei, Renji, Byakuya, or Aizen. I contemplated Gin for a moment, but no. You cannot not suport Gin x Rangiku XDD

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Vizard-Shinigami [2010-04-07 02:35:47 +0000 UTC]

cool OC

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Saisuki In reply to Vizard-Shinigami [2010-04-07 02:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you !

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Vizard-Shinigami In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-07 02:42:58 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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hparrott97 [2010-04-07 01:06:18 +0000 UTC]

its really good ^^ and tho the background is plain i like how the top part is shaded and says ur name. her background story is really good too^^ i feel bad for her, tho... i hope she finds the man she loves soon

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Saisuki In reply to hparrott97 [2010-04-07 01:14:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you! haha, yes, my friend gave me some tips on how to make the background a little better, and perhaps i will get around to doing it awww, don't feel bad for her. i'm still contemplating whether she will find hidetada or not, but she will find happiness sometime ^_^ thanks for commenting!

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hparrott97 In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-08 00:35:37 +0000 UTC]

i always forget the background too ^^ by the time i get to it its just... whatever... and i REALLY hope she finds him ^^ i love happy endings... and no problem!!

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Saisuki In reply to hparrott97 [2010-04-08 01:45:44 +0000 UTC]

lol, me, too! thank you~ if Yumiko was a real person, she would definitely appreciate your comment. But since she's not, I am here to appreciate your comment

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hparrott97 In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-08 19:23:51 +0000 UTC]

ok that works!!! ^^

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hyperdark06 [2010-04-06 23:10:00 +0000 UTC]

nice do u rp

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Saisuki In reply to hyperdark06 [2010-04-07 01:08:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you! I used to rp, but I have had nobody to rp with, so I currently don't

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hyperdark06 In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-07 01:14:59 +0000 UTC]

i see well i could rp with u

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Saisuki In reply to hyperdark06 [2010-04-07 01:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the offer, but I'd feel very uncomfortable, because I have not done it in awhile. Sorry

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hyperdark06 In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-07 01:49:28 +0000 UTC]

ok

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mchemfan [2010-04-06 09:16:30 +0000 UTC]

This looks beautiful and I adore her back story.

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Saisuki In reply to mchemfan [2010-04-06 11:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I was afraid it'd be so, I guess, mary-sue, so I have been hesitant in doing anything with her. Thank you for your comment!

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mchemfan In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-06 11:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Not at all I adore everything about her, her zan paku to has me especially intrigued.

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Saisuki In reply to mchemfan [2010-04-07 01:09:53 +0000 UTC]

>///< thank you again your comment has truly enlightened my day~!

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MingJu [2010-04-06 08:29:35 +0000 UTC]

LOVE your OC I should draw her
it has been aloooonnnnng time I haven't drawn Bleach fanarts xD

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Saisuki In reply to MingJu [2010-04-06 11:28:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I knoes! Draw some soon!! I drew some actual fanarts for bleach myself!! (like, without ocs) incredible, i know !

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MingJu In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-06 11:33:32 +0000 UTC]

sure thing it will be fun to draw her and more bleach images

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Saisuki In reply to MingJu [2010-04-07 01:20:10 +0000 UTC]

I cannot wait to see more Bleach stuff from you by the way, how is school for you? Are you still super duper busy and stuff?

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MingJu In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-07 03:12:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you
NO NO NON~!!!! Thank you for asking , I just finished school, I am on my Easter break ahahaha So i have lots of free time, but I am very busy still ahaha I have 3 assignments due on the first week back at school xD how about you?

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Saisuki In reply to MingJu [2010-04-07 11:25:36 +0000 UTC]

THE TOILET LA IS THE LULZ. 8D

& the legasp is so cute X3 Haha, kind of off-topic there That's good to hear. I hope you've had good sleep? I never quite realized, but a lot of people that I watch seem to be depriving themselves of sleep between school and art. Sheesh, school just doesn't know when to stop Awww, that stinks, the assignments thing.

Um, okay, I guess. I have three tests on Monday, which is sort of strange, because I think my teachers at least try not to put tests on the same day. Today I have two exams, too. Which I didn't really study for Homework is taking me a lot longer than usual. It used to be that I'd be on teh computer by five, but yesterday it was like six forty and other days it's gone basically to dinnertime. But I feel as though I have less homework than usual. I don't get it

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MingJu In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-07 13:20:02 +0000 UTC]

well that's the odd, bit ahahaha it is only 9:19pm right now XD I ain't a sleep yet lol, I just got outta the gym! ahahaha XD
I know ;__; I am so busy but I will leave it to the last week of the holidays Q___Q cause I havent had anytime to draw very much so I am drawing as much as I can before school starts

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Saisuki In reply to MingJu [2010-04-07 23:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, Ulqui made it to your icon wow, out of the gym that late? i'd be starving all over again but that's a brilliant way to go to sleep. i imagine that one would be so exhausted sleep would come in an instant! D: very interesting forms of there

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MingJu In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-08 05:52:10 +0000 UTC]

no I went at 5:30pm I got back around 8:30pm with my mum is took like 2 classes in the gym ahaha xD.! LOL I love those icons thingys!!! bauhahahaha thanx! Ulquiorra is the best too bad he died.

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Saisuki In reply to MingJu [2010-04-08 23:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay haha he's not dead, he got purified by ichigo's zanpaku-to!!! And Orihime will bring him back !!

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MingJu In reply to Saisuki [2010-04-09 01:15:39 +0000 UTC]

that's good then Orihime and him make such the cutest couple

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Saisuki In reply to MingJu [2010-04-09 01:42:29 +0000 UTC]

I know X3

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AleSan [2010-04-06 02:29:14 +0000 UTC]

i have no idea of bleach 8D.

but anyways, the art... mmm yeah, you kinda screwed out with the BG :/, maybe if you added some grass so the trees wouldn't look so plain, also some shadows to the wood.

the dirt is too clear... some rocks would be nice ;D.

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Saisuki In reply to AleSan [2010-04-06 11:26:46 +0000 UTC]

lol. I gave up on the BG >.< I wanted to just smudge the ends of the trees out (because I didn't want to draw it out on my own and I didn't want to open Photoshop ) but. I didn't. Because I am too darn lazy! Maybe I'll get the energy to do it sometime Thanks!

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