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Published: 2009-04-09 04:59:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3269; Favourites: 98; Downloads: 76
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For 's contest her two Ocs ^_^ Tsuki and Xion. There are like a bazillion things wrong with this T_T I triedRelated content
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It looks really good. I don't see anything wrong with it...
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The pic looks goregous to me and I like both their outfits
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I love her boobs. There is something about the right hand... Don't ask me what seriously I can barely draw, even less color. Sooo yea but the hand I saw by looking over and over, they really were the last thing I looked at. I really like her eyes, they were the first thing I looked at, maybe it is because she seems like she is looking at you or maybe it is the color.
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The girl looks really pretty and I like the background D:! Pretty art skills :3.
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good luck with the contest!
lovely coloring indeed!
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I wouldn't say a bazillion things. The only things I would fix would be their hips. They're so narrow. The girl especially should have a more curvy shape. Oh, and hands come down to the middle of the thigh, which is why I think Xion's arms look a bit short.
That out of the way, I find the picture colorful and really cute. They make an adorable couple and you were able to express that they enjoy being together. Good luck with the contest.
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I could never get those hips right x__x need more practice. Thanks for pointing it out
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For me, male hips are harder to get right. ><; Not enough curve, but not completely straight. Let's not start on actually drawing their asses...
You're welcome.
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I absolutely love the roses and the textures for the lace! The characters themselves look great and have a lot of personality, as well. The only thing that looks a little "off" would be the anatomy below their waist (their hips and legs look a bit skinny compared to the rest of their bodies). Other than that, it looks awesome, Momo! I hope ya win!
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I like it alot. Ooh yea I also seen the critque option. I will use it surely whenever I find it needed. In the mean time comments only.
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you should.. >_>; infact i put it up there just for you ^_^.. You need to write at least 100 words though for it to be vaild. TeeHee.. XD have fun
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These can not be OC's from that person. I know this because I know I have seen these two characters somewhere before. I just cant remember where though.
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Well with no cited sources...it's kind of hard to make your point.
With the way creativity has been today, the influences of what's popular, and just the huge mountain of characters there are in the world compared to the hill it was in the past... it's quite near impossible to create a character that doesn't look similar to another. Hell...even professional make characters that look alike.
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I don't see alot of errors D8 Except after their waists,but this really looks good,Sakura! Keep up the good work!
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I like Tsuki's outfit
Good luck in the contest, and also love the new avatar :3
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i dont see alot of things that are wrong with it.the only thing i do see is that the guy seems a bit tall. but thats it. it looks real good.
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I tried doing a bit of perspective where the guy appeared a bit bigger being infront but it just looks weird
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oh ok, thats why he looks taller then. but it isnt bad. dont beat yourself over the small things.
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