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DemonOfSarila [2010-02-27 00:55:30 +0000 UTC]
improving anatomy is always a fun topic. practice and reference in general are usually good advice.
the two on the side are pretty good on their upper body, though their legs are a bit off. their legs are done pretty well, you may have to use a reference to help fix them.
watch the shapes of their wastes.
the mouths on the side two are ok, but because their heads are at an angle. it doesn't work as well on the center one. as far as the center one, her boobs are too far to the side, maybe moving them closer. I'm not sure what's up with the silver 'claw'. her pose is too perfect/center. i think the shoulder with the black might be bigger than the bare one, i'm not sure. her right leg might be longer than her left one. her ankles and feet are bent slightly inward i think. her shadow is mostly good, but it's not under feet, it's more behind them (and you know people have shadows under their feet), maybe it would help if it just extended to be more under her feet.
also, all of them have feet from head on front or side views, and it looks ridged. unless the camera was at their feet, pointing up from just the right spot it wouldn't look like that. (again references can help)
those i must say over all your anatomy isn't bad, there's a few little things that could use some adjusting, but cartoon and anime characters are known for being unrealistic.
the shadows on the ground seem ok, but on their bodies you have placement and sometimes contrast issues. on the girl with the white hair, the shadows are barely their at all. the actual shading technique seem ok on the one with brown highlighted hair. knowing where to put shadows isn't something i'm so great at either, but I find the MA lesson it helpful: [link]
(referencing objects in real life helps too, sorry but i'm not the best at placing shadows myself)
so over all not that bad really, just keep working at it! I like their expressions, and the poses you've picked work really well together. also the outfits (including shoes) match that whole attitude the piece has (including the attitude on their faces).
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Lizalot [2010-02-21 14:17:58 +0000 UTC]
wiiiiiiiin
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rialynkv [2010-02-21 10:17:46 +0000 UTC]
You did the anatomy well. The only thing that concerns me is that maybe you need to add more shade, they're too thin, if you ask me, especially the girl with white hair.
The shade on her body is almost invisible to see. XD;;
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Eohlas [2010-02-09 03:35:53 +0000 UTC]
Like others have already pointed out, the boobs on the middle is too high up. They're only high when a push-up bra of some kind is worn. (That, or she had plastic surgery... <_< >_>)
I'd also like to point out that her left shoulder (right to us) is too long.
I really like the hand on the purple-eyed girl, it's wonderfully drawn. However, her kneeling leg looks very odd.. as if it's broken in two parts.
The white-haired girl.. I'm not sure what you're trying to do with her shoulders, but if you're making one of them up and the other down,
I suggest having the shoulders follow a line at an angle. It will help make it look more natural. Right now, it just looks like she is tensing up her left shoulder.
Other than that, you seem to have the basic anatomy down.
As for the shadows/highlights:
I want to say that the shadows on the white-haired girl is too subtle, but then, my monitor is unusually bright.
Most of it makes sense, except for the shadows on the middle girl's leg. The shadows on the floor indicates that the light is coming from the right (our right). If that is so, then there shouldn't be any shadow on her right (our left) leg toward the inside. It'd make more sense for the shadows to be on the other side.
Gee, that was a long ramble. Hope I make sense. Good luck with art-ing!
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Kabutolover334 [2010-02-08 23:10:44 +0000 UTC]
I am loving this picture and that song. However I think you made the eyes too big, unless you are doing anime style. I still like it and I'm a big fan of Beyonce.
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Shirei-Shou [2010-02-08 07:27:51 +0000 UTC]
The anatomy is not bad. U just need to put more detail in Ur art. For example finger, also so line in their body. The shadow is nice. but U must focus from 'where the light come'. It will make U easier to decide which area should U shade ^^
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AmandaisSnazzy [2009-09-09 00:58:10 +0000 UTC]
This is so awesome! I love it!
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SakuraSyanide In reply to BeautiflxInsane [2009-09-05 15:13:34 +0000 UTC]
Um actually no she's not. I've seen interviews with her and I've seen her in other things and she's definitely not a man. Her name's Ebony Williams and she's a professional dancer.
But thank you anyway. ^^
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BeautiflxInsane In reply to SakuraSyanide [2009-09-05 15:14:32 +0000 UTC]
haha okay. o.o rumors rumors. but.. she does kind of look the part in the video. no offence to her or anything. xD
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SakuraSyanide [2009-09-05 14:54:51 +0000 UTC]
I need to fix Nightingale's shading OTZ
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WickedStellar [2009-09-05 03:28:45 +0000 UTC]
WOW Hubba Hubba o: Love that song, love this picture.
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CattBon [2009-09-05 01:40:23 +0000 UTC]
THEY LOOKS SEX-AY! I love their hair and poses most of all. I really like the floor shading too!
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SakuraSyanide In reply to CattBon [2009-09-05 13:55:26 +0000 UTC]
8D THANK YOUU!!! ^^
I'm worried 'cause of school naoo... I won't be able to get your house that often to use SAI.... eh, there's always vacations! ^^
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BBG4ya [2009-09-05 00:17:47 +0000 UTC]
HO SHET! >: ( I wanted to do a pic to this song but the cogs in my brain wasnt working. ANywho i think you did a fabu job with the pic. better than something i would have done
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SakuraSyanide In reply to BBG4ya [2009-09-05 00:55:08 +0000 UTC]
So you do like Beyonce! I didn't know if you listened to her music or not but I put Firanna in her position anyway 'cause they both have fiery attitudes that I love.......wow...no pun intended... XD
You should still do one 'cause I think it'll turn out AWESOME! ^^
Next I'm gonna do Ego (I just made that my ringtone today! XD) and Lady Marmalade. 8D
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BBG4ya In reply to SakuraSyanide [2009-09-05 01:03:35 +0000 UTC]
LOL Are you implying that just because I dont show it, that i dont like hip hop? LOL just kidding. yea i totally love her music. i made a dance to this song.
eg is also a pretty good one too
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CattBon In reply to BBG4ya [2009-09-05 01:40:05 +0000 UTC]
XD I tried Dancing THE Single Ladies dance. but my hair got in my face and I couldn't breathe or see the t.v. and I started being funny after that.
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BBG4ya In reply to CattBon [2009-09-05 04:00:23 +0000 UTC]
LOL i just made up my own routine
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SakuraSyanide In reply to BBG4ya [2009-09-05 01:38:53 +0000 UTC]
You know actually you do a little bit (show that you like hip-hop)... I just don't know how. XD I guess I just assumed but I wasn't %100 XD
Awww I've loved her since Destiny's Child and I was excited to see her blow up and become a major super star! ^^
Nahhhaaa!! I love that song. It's just the curly hair will be a huuuuge pain for me >.< Imma gonna try though! ^^
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SakuraSyanide In reply to skittles713 [2009-09-05 00:57:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! ^^
Yeeaaaahh I got lazy 'cause I didn't sketch the hands and it was WAAAYY too hard to try and SAI it. >.< It's so weird sometimes I have no problems drawing hands (which is really rare actually.. >.< ) and most of the time I just can't do it at all. TT^TT I wanna get betteeerrrr!
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