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SakuraTenshi101 β€” Tenshi - Beautiful Freedom

Published: 2013-10-31 22:01:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 597; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Description Another picture! It took forever!

But I'm happy it came out well. ;v; There are some mistakes though... ;A; I used a couple references from tumblr to make the cage (since I'm horrible at making objects) and the trees in the background. And textures galore~ *dies*

Anyways, I hope you all like it! >v<

Tenshi Kamine (c) me

Time: 11 hours
Used: Paint Tool Sai
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Comments: 23

Nyanfood [2013-11-24 17:25:44 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


One of the biggest things I realized when learning to draw was to never half-ass anything.

You have a great vision and it's quite original. The colors have been chosen very well. But you stinted on details. Details save a piece! Never rely on cheap tricks like dodge tool and fuzzy lines. Never rely purely on nice patterns. What I see here is an idea that has yet to reach past a rough draft.

Of course, your style is your own. I can't tell you to change your style. However, I want to ask you if you thought "flowers are too hard. I'll just draw them like that" or bushes are too hard, I'll just give it the semblance of a shape," or "shading all of the pearls take too long, so I'll just do it sort of like this."

Even if something looks bad, if it's filled with detail, the details themselves, put together, somehow makes it look good. That was what I realized when I started going digital. Even if the anatomy was wrong. Even if the coloring was bad, if I put a great deal of detail into it, the picture will convey that.

If you'd like, I can teach you how to handle things like flowers and bushes with a bit more grace. PM me if you'd like and I'll give you a way to contact me.

Also, good job on getting the shading on the fairy's torso correctly. That's a tricky one, but you got it.

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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to Nyanfood [2013-11-24 17:55:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique! And, I agree, the torso I had to work at a few times, because it was very tricky. Especially without a reference…


As for the rest of the picture, to be honest, I wasn't quite sure where to start with making all of the flowers and bushes to have a watercolor look to it and still look detailed. So I guess I got a little intimidated, is my problem. I noticed it happens a lot when I try to add detail to something. OTL


And a good part of it was laziness and a cramping hand, I'll admit to that. Though I've also noticed I'll get caught up in drawing something and I'll forget to work on details when I work digitally. Like, I know it's there, however, I thought I worked on it, only to find out after posting it that I completely forgot that area. =/


I think another thing I need to get into the habit of is taking breaks so I can sit back and look at the picture to figure out what I need to to and what else I could do. And to see what I've missed. Definitely that.Β 


But I would love to be able to know any tips and tricks I could learn for flowers and bushes. ;v; That would be great, seeing as I just kind of freeze up and get lost on what to do. I'll be sure to PM you. Thanks again for the critique! Maybe once I learn your secrets, I'll go back and fix it. ='D

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Nyanfood In reply to SakuraTenshi101 [2013-11-24 18:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem. Plants are haaard.

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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to Nyanfood [2013-11-24 18:07:09 +0000 UTC]

They are ;A; I have no problem making a few flowers, but as soon as it comes to a bunch, I'm just at a loss.

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Nyanfood In reply to SakuraTenshi101 [2013-11-24 18:14:02 +0000 UTC]

TBH, you just need to draw about five or six really nice, detailed. Then you copy and paste the rest in various sizes and at different rotations, then change the darkness and clarity on them. No one can tell the difference. o uo

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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to Nyanfood [2013-11-24 18:37:41 +0000 UTC]

……Well, now I just feel silly The idea never even occurred to me

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Nyanfood In reply to SakuraTenshi101 [2013-11-24 18:38:48 +0000 UTC]

-patpat-

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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to Nyanfood [2013-11-24 20:02:29 +0000 UTC]

*patted* ;v;

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Sameore [2014-09-19 13:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Forever? How many days? lol

Well, congratulations on the details; I like how you dew the water...

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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to Sameore [2014-09-20 15:51:15 +0000 UTC]

XD It felt like a year, but it was seriously only 11 hours. But thank you!

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Sameore In reply to SakuraTenshi101 [2014-09-22 11:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh, really? I guess you were working hard on some details then...

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Rina-292 [2014-09-05 22:36:30 +0000 UTC]

Pretty!

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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to Rina-292 [2014-09-06 14:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ;v;

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Rina-292 In reply to SakuraTenshi101 [2014-09-06 17:22:35 +0000 UTC]

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MasterOfUnlocking [2014-01-21 23:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Lovely work! Β 

Such a beautiful cage, but I feel so sorry for the fairy!Β 


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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to MasterOfUnlocking [2014-01-23 02:57:51 +0000 UTC]

I actually didn't like how the cage came out, but at least you think it looks nice XD But thank you so much!

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MasterOfUnlocking In reply to SakuraTenshi101 [2014-01-23 23:30:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!Β 

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josegoncalo [2013-11-24 17:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Is she going through the cage?

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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to josegoncalo [2013-11-24 18:04:24 +0000 UTC]

No, it's just a trick people use to show the face so the bar isn't in the way ;v; I can understand why it might be confusing though

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josegoncalo In reply to SakuraTenshi101 [2013-11-24 18:05:57 +0000 UTC]

okay.

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Yumichan216 [2013-11-01 00:21:30 +0000 UTC]

This looks really lovely ;Β u ;

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SakuraTenshi101 In reply to Yumichan216 [2013-11-01 01:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ;v;

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Yumichan216 In reply to SakuraTenshi101 [2013-11-01 23:16:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome :3

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