Coro-Yuki [2016-11-01 22:16:23 +0000 UTC]
It looks like the pike is coming too close to the foreground compared with how the rat is standing, perhaps if his right leg was lower then the left and bigger to show it is closer to the audiance, and his right hand angled toward the foreground the pike would look less disproportionate.
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