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Raine-Oni [2007-09-08 06:36:31 +0000 UTC]
I adore the background!
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Viika [2007-09-07 17:38:11 +0000 UTC]
Interesting title and image, I really love the text on the background and all in all the layout and composition are very good and beautiful.
What comes to Advanced Critique, I think you should "harmonize" the colors a bit more, to make the colors "belong together" more. Sorry I can't explain it better, my English sucks on Fridays.
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sammigurl61190 In reply to Viika [2007-09-07 20:40:01 +0000 UTC]
Like making the green less on the blue side and more on the yellow side?
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Viika In reply to sammigurl61190 [2007-09-08 11:38:30 +0000 UTC]
Yes, something like that.
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LottnessMonster In reply to sammigurl61190 [2007-09-08 02:44:57 +0000 UTC]
It's beautiful and haunting at the same time, it says so much that I sometimes need to say.. I just couldn't say it then.
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