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emmagucci [2014-05-05 07:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Love the choice to do it round with flowers! It makes it look cooler! xD 

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phase-daze [2014-05-05 05:25:52 +0000 UTC]

I like your design concept with the flowers overlapping the circle of the main illustration!
And you shaded the hair/dress pretty well (maybe add more wrinkles for more realism)

The foliage is too detailed, try blurring out some of the less focused ares, and it overshadows the rocks too much. Like the waterfall and foliage are all extremely saturated compared to the rocks so it gives the overall illustration a feeling of rigid/abrupt separation. The rocks could use more detail to represent textures, also more contrast.
The skin needs more shading too because there isn't much distinction in light source and such, and regardless of her skin tone things like the dress and her hair would leave dark shadows. Also, the flowers should probably have more details/shading because they look flat right now

And something I've been observing about your works is that they're very separated. Like here for example, the rocks are brown, plants are green, waterfall is blue etc and I see you've added yellow lighting throughout which is great! but things like water would reflect, show through the rocks/foliage behind it. So I suggest having more color blending throughout the different objects

You're definitely improving with things like anatomy and I see more creative concepts within the pieces! It's always good to try out new environments and backgrounds xD
and gosh I wrote a lot of stuff so hope you don't mind keep up the good work you're doing great!

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