Comments: 5
Uruboros [2013-07-02 03:11:41 +0000 UTC]
The copy editor in me would be annoyed if I let you spell clue as "clew" and coma and "comma". Anyway, the story was definitely exciting. I think the fight fit the capabilities of the character well.
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JackalyenMystique [2013-07-01 02:17:05 +0000 UTC]
How about "Defending a Friend" for a title?
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