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Published: 2006-04-05 22:36:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1491; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 175
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A closeupp i dodeld upp, i allso adjusted her face a bid allso for a some details fixing of the comic im working on with her in.updated and i think i still dint got the nose right...
"give constuctive critics (must) for say its of wont healp me, and say what is and how one can fix it"
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I think it looks very good, the one thing that bugs me a bot would be the nose. Since it looks a bit too human-ish. But it's still very well drawn 
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I think the left eye (left from the viewers perspective) is to far to the left and needs to be brought in a bit closer to the nose, it looks as if by the line of the jaw and where the nose is, that it would acctually be on the side of her head at the moment. Also the shape of the jaw changes drasticly (sp) from one side to the other, it goes from angular to being very very rouned, doesn't look that natural. I think the ears a little bit off as well I can't tell you what bothers me about the left ear, but the right ear doesn't look like it's acctually attached to the head, the angel is a bit off.
That's all I can think off.
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The nose was already commented on- other than that, what catches me is that even allowing for perspective the two backpack(?) straps looks as though they're drastically differrent sizes.
Other than that, great pic. Nice to see you posting on DA again. (Do you have SA or FA accounts?)
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i think it looks good. the nose is just a hair off, but it's a really good pic. i wish i could draw faces in different angles that easily.
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