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Sorry it's in Finnish...
BUT NOW THERE'S crappy TRANSLATION AFTER MY COMMENTS!
I wasn't sure how I should post this in here, one page at time or with 3-4 pages at one file... but here ya go, THE WHOLE THING IN SAME FILE.
SO YEEES, I took part in 24 hours comic for the first time, and here's the result!
Started at 00:00 in October 20th, ended at 21:54 (so about two hours ahead of time, wohoo!).
I'm proud of myself that I finished this in time, but not so proud of the story, ha ha ha XD
It was a fun experience, now I just feel like not doing any comics for a while... :'D
OH and btw
Antti (the angel) is my older OC I made up at our school's comic class (and has way more personality than Alfred, 'cause Alfred is a whole new character XD). He even has his own little ten pages long comic Angel Boxing >> [link] (only photos, not any pages :'D)
He was meant to be a heavy metal guy boxer angel, so that's why he has boxing glove on the last panel
I want to draw him properly, with colors someday...WELL YEAH, HOPE YA ENJOY!
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TRANSLATION
Antti: Hey...
Antti: Are you alright?
Alfred: I'm not.
A train ran over me.
Antti: NOOH! I came too late afterall...!
Alfred: ... What do you mean, "too late"?
Antti: Well, 'cause...
Antti: I was send here to be your guardian angel...
That you wouldn't hit by a train, but...
I faild, I FAILD! (I'm a pathetic angel!)
Alfred:...
Do I really look dead to you?
Antti: (Huh?)
Antti: So you didn't get hit by a train?!
Alfred: If I had, I would be mashed.
Antti: Then why are you lying here on the railway?
Alfred: I'm waiting for a train.
Antti: You aren't...
You aren't going to do a suicide?
Alfred: Tsk (ha ha ha)
I'm not.
Antti: (PHEW!)
Alfred:I'm going to my sons funeral.
I got a letter from my ex wife a while ago...
The doctors didn't find the reason for the disease...
He lived only eight years...
Antti: (sob)
Alfred: You don't need to cry...
Antti: But... it's so sad... (sniffle - sniff)
Alfred: I didn't know my son so well... (I've seen him only a few times...)
But still I feel like it was better to die... To die for him...
Alfred: But if the Lord himself has sent a guardian angel to protect me...
... maybe there's a reason me to live, after all...
Antti: (HMPH.)
Antti: So you were going to do a suicide, afterall.
Alfred: Yes.
>>LIFT<<
Antti: Listen, Alfred
Antti: ... Uhh...
Don't do that suicide.
Alfred: Well I won't.
Antti: ... Good.
Alfred: You're not very convincing angel...
Antti: Well at least I 'saved' your life...!
Alfred: I guess so...
What's your name, angel?
Antti: Antti.
Alfred: Antti? Funny name.
Antti: (I-it's normal name! Alfred is a funny name!)
Alfred: Are you some kind of a angel rookie? (You're pretty spindly, ho ho)
Antti: Umm... that's uhh--
Alfred: I tought that angels are all muscular and brave.. But you don't look like any of those.
Antti: Okay, I'm just a trainee! And I was nervous and now I'm unnerved(???)! (This is my first mission!)
But I am strong! (I'm strong if nothing else! I'm not as weak as I might look like!)
Alfred: Prove it.
Antti: ... (uhh...)
I'll fly you to that funeral - in an hour!
Alfred: Hmm.
Alfred: Go ahead.
Antti: Where the funeral will be?
Alfred: At Heart Capital... that's about 200km from here to the north.
... Antti?
Alfred: I'll go on foot or by train if you can't do it... There are few days 'till the funeral, anyway...
Antti: NO, WAIT!
I can do it! I'll show you!
>>GRAB<<
Alfred: ---
Oh my God... I'm gonna fall..
Antti: Don't worry, I won't drop you. (I said I was strong.)
Anti: ... You're ridiculously heavy, though... (Don't kick!)
Alfred: DON'T YOU DROP ME!
Antti: Are we there already?
Alfred: Yes.
Antti: Pretty desolate place...
Alfred: U-huh.
Alfred: Thank you, Antti...
... That you flew me all the way here...
Alfred: Without you I would have certainly been hit by a train, without thinking and considering more...
So, thanks.
And... now when you're my guardian angel...
Alfred: You must fly me back home. (I'll save some money again 'cause I don't need to pay the tickets...)
Antti: NO. (I'm not gonna fly a fat guy like you anywhere anymore!)
THE END.
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Pencil + edited with Photoshop CS5
Art/story/characters © ~Sardiini
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Comments: 12
hehehe tää on sanoin kuvaamattoman ihana, en oo eka joka sanoo tän mut silti
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too bad it's in finnish because it looks awesome!!! *O*
(google translator, here I come xD!)
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Aww, thank you! C'8 (I now added translation, if it helps at all~ %D )
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Oh god thank you! (I am always so clumsy with the translations -//-)
*O*
better now knowing what they are talking about (well, the base was very clear xD)
very beautiful! ^^
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